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Reviews for Who Knew Candy Was a Turn On?

By : JenniferKantrowitz
  • From ANON - jade on June 28, 2015
    very pleased to review. I would request slightly longer chapters. just when you feel you have a chance to get into it ....its over. kind of like a guy that finishes before you have chance to. Otherwise I love the idea. I hope there are enough reviews to continue.
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  • From ANON - demonicnekomaster on June 12, 2015
    five reviews? why so few? sure it was a little short but It was a classic scene that actually could have happened except it wouldn't be as limony.
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  • From ANON - Brittany Hobbs on January 09, 2015
    More, please.
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  • From pookagirl on July 30, 2013
    would have preferred if they started teasing her orally first---that would have been closer to what she did to them...and would have liked them to involve some sort of candy.....would love to see a Mori/Haruhi pairing....
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  • From ali5 on May 14, 2012
    THIS STORY IS AWESOME PLEASE CONTINUE
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  • From lillyput93 on February 01, 2012
    LIKE LIKE LIKE!!!
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  • From blackmooninu on December 19, 2011
    oh wow, yea I really can't wait to read the rest so as soon as you can please post. Oh and could you do a threesome of Mori,Haruhi, and Kyouya. POST SOON!!
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  • From sainmoth14 on May 05, 2011
    hmm i think you have a great story here keep it up, and your planned pairings are brilliant keep up the good work can't wait to read more
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  • From Mirrors1984 on April 03, 2011
    Writing threesomes can be tricky and though the idea of the three of them is hot, it could have used some more descriptiveness. I also don't mind double-penetration because unlike one of your reviewers, it IS possible, just a bit too much for the 'first time'. People have to be prepped big time (in other words: have practice in both... ahem... body parts) before going into a first actual double-penetration, otherwise it would be too uncomfortable to actually be arousing. (just some facts) Don't ask me how I know this! *blushes* But I've written way too much smut for my own good. And I would like to see a round 2. =)
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  • From ToriYummemiya on December 05, 2010
    ... i

    .....want

    ........................more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


    ADT
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  • From tealrain on November 03, 2010
    You know, I was just going to navigate away from the page and not say anything, but I can't help it. I have to at least politely point out that if Haruhi and the twins were to have a three-way, there is no human way possible that they could both be in her at the same time. Not only is it kind of a disgusting thought, the body wouldn't be able to handle the pressure and it would probably kill her. The body can only stretch so much, and I just can't see this happening.I'm not trying to be mean or tear you down for it, but I would suggest if you want more readers I would try to keep that sort of thing out of your fan fiction. Thank you.
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  • From WildFireEmpress on October 14, 2010
    I like please keep writing!!
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  • From JuliaRoseBlack on September 30, 2010
    Definately a good start... Kyouya is my favourite to be paired with Haruhi besides the twins, but I wouldn't say no to some mori either.. ;P
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  • From marianbri on September 10, 2010
    Wow! This was a nice and yummy start. Please continue.
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  • From Vidori on August 24, 2010
    Kyoya!

    Mmm, definitely worth another chapter! That was good, though it could have been a little longer. Can't wait to see an update.
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