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Reviews for The Beginning And The End

By : Daydreamer79
  • From JLHanley13 on July 07, 2011
    I loved it but it is so sad. I knew you said it would be.. and it actually turned out happier than I thought but still it saddens me.

    Thank you for writing!

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  • From ShikaChouFan4Life on December 02, 2010
    OMG, that was one of the best Kuroshitsuji fics that I have ever read. T_T That ending...it was PERFECT. It closed everything off nicely, but was still open enough to continue onto a sequel if you wanted to. You are going to do one, right? ;D
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  • From ANON - jishe on December 01, 2010
    OMG!!!! TTT_TTTT
    Let me cry for an hour...or maybe more...
    Poor Undertaker! Really...sniff...sniff...very sad...
    I would like to read about the reunion between Undertaker and Ciel in the future...you know, when Ciel is already master of Sebastian, but hey! I suppose that will be ever more cruel for the poor man...
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  • From ANON - Althydia on December 01, 2010
    Sad ending, although Alastair will still be able to watch over his son and lover from a distance. But we were warned. He really got a harsh punishment, though, to have his life stolen like that...
    I really enjoyed your story anyway, and hope you might be interested in writing another story for Kuroshitsuji in the future. I would love to see a continuation of this story where Ciel might finally learn the truth... If you ever get the inspiration for it. :)
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  • From ANON - Althydia on November 30, 2010
    Some sexual tension between Vincent and Alastair finally resolved! I really enjoyed this new chapter, and am looking forward to the mpreg mentioned in the warnings, and how the two main characters will deal with it.
    Vincent's thoughts do keep being focused on his new lover, don't they? :)
    Also, Kuroshitsuji doesn't have a happily ever after ending anyway, so I'm sure fans (including me) can understand if this story doesn't either. Particularly if you want to keep parts of the canon storyline...

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  • From ANON - jishe on November 29, 2010
    Well...about that of the "happily ever after end"...kind of evident...i mean: look a the end of the anime!!! Ok...just forget that...-_-'''
    Anyway...even if that is the case, just hope to enjoy a little bit more of Vincent/Allegro in the future, before the sadly end...
    Maybe a bit of jelousy from allegros part...? jijijijijijijiiiji
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  • From ANON - Althydia on November 10, 2010
    Yay, another chapter again!
    I really liked it too, still as well written as before. So Rachel and Angelina appear... But Vincent can only think about Alastair. I wonder if the latter will make a move on him the moment they find themselves alone in the Phamtomhive estate. Maybe just for the fun of shocking him and see his reaction. :) Poor Vincent is already frustrated (and in denial) enough, so Alastair could have mercy on him...
    Also, funny hint to a potential future: "There was no person on the earth capable of handling his duties as well as Tanaka. It would take a demon to keep up with him." Indeed, it would. ;)
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  • From ANON - jishe on November 10, 2010
    Hey you!
    Thanks for the new chapter. Sooo...they finally apear; i mean Rachel and Angelina....but Vincent definitively isn't a little bit interested in neither of them...just Allegro...allegro...allegro....jijijijijiji >///
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  • From ANON - jishe on November 03, 2010
    Wow! That was amazing! I almost cry when i found out there wasn't a "Next chapter" link...T-T
    Allow me to congratulate you, for this fic. The history is very original and well development.
    Hope to read chapter 3 soon!
    Bye!
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  • From ANON - Althydia on November 01, 2010
    No, don't leave it at that! Your story is still as fascinating as before and I can't wait to read the following chapter...
    It's funny too: I was just thinking that Undertaker's scars were not mentioned, but now it's done!
    Will Vincent and Alastair's relationship become more steamy soon? And I liked that Vincent imagined Alastair when Michael was kissing him. The temptation should be too strong for him now... (hopefully!)
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  • From ANON - Althydia on October 26, 2010
    Yay, you wrote another mpreg Kuroshitsuji story! The beginning looks very promising too, I'm already really intrigued about the following chapters - are there going to be many more? Also, an unusual pairing, but ideal in a way because we don't know much about Vincent Phantomhive (at least in the anime) and Undertaker is always very mysterious, so it gives you a lot of liberty to write them as you like without offending purists. Although I don't think you need to add "supernatural beings" to your warnings for a Kuroshitsuji fic, even if it's AR. :) Besides that you still write very well, with good characterisation and plot development. I hope that the next chapter will have more sexual tension between Vincent and Undertaker (loved the horses/buttocks veiled innuendo, by the way!), while still delving further into the plot...
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