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Reviews for Companion

By : SilverDemonWolf
  • From FlareLizard on May 18, 2012
    Erm, I'm not sure how to ask this without seeming patronizing...

    I would like your permission to make use of the universe you have created, of intimate relationships with Pokemon you can understand and Companions as well. In plain English, I want to make a story with your ideas, with your permission, of course.

    I just have a couple questions:
    1) Is there any special method for choosing a Companion?
    2) I would like to, again with permission, copy word-for-word the professor's speech near the beginning of chapter one. You did a wonderful job of detailing the specifics of this world.

    Again, I apologize if i sound patronizing. If you did grant permission, I would not use any of your characters, and would indicate that you were the original authoress of this work and world. My story would be posted here on AFF (of course) and also on Sofurry, if permissible.

    My email address is: aura.flare21@gmail.com
    Reply when you get a free minute.
    Thank you very much,
    FlareLizard
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  • From FlareLizard on May 04, 2012
    I've heard of running into people, but not literally! And it happens twice in one chapter! Aww, Adorable Eevee-morph. I wonder how long it will take before the Nidoran (Atamu, was it?) gets more...ahem... intimately acquainted with his new Trainer? By the way, in the first chapter, you indicated Dai's eye color was hazel when she was conversing with Scald, and now (Chapter three) her eyes are gray? Good work. Hope to see more soon.
    ~FL
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  • From FlareLizard on May 04, 2012
    "You mean hilarity ensues?" No kidding. Hmm. I wonder where that Bidoof came from? A starter Pokemon with an egg move is certainly different, though Scald's explanation makes sense. "Scald, No one reads the manual." Again, No kidding. *laughs* Jello monster?! Run for your lives! Oh, wait...It's just a Zorua...Nevermind. :) The intimate scene was well done, and Scald showed his more thoughtful, considerate side. Dai becoming an Elite Four member? Now that's something I haven't seen before.
    ~FL
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  • From FlareLizard on May 04, 2012
    This was rather entertaining. The lecture given by the professor at the beginning details the specifics of the world nicely. The Totodile's open-mouth, insert-foot moment (At least that's what I call them), had me in stitches. Whoops. Scald's reaction was...expected, but it was still funny. I'm certainly eager for more.
    ~FL
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  • From Drago on December 15, 2011
    Yay! New pokemon! And New Chapter!

    I'm glad you posted another chapter and sorry you had crap fest of bad stuff happen to you.

    I had an idea for another trainer by the way.

    It can be male or female, but a trainer that calls themselves "Wraith" and only has ghost types and maybe a dark type or two is you think they fit. I was actually trying to make this trainer in my Pokemon Black game before it got stolen... :( Even transfer over a level 1 Ghastly named Cheshire for him to use.

    Any way feel free to use this trainer as you see fit.
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  • From sillyneko345 on November 11, 2011
    I'm very glad you're going to be continuing this! The battle scene was quite good, I thought; concise but descriptive. Practice makes perfect, team! I'll be looking forward to the next chapter, whenever you have time to produce it.
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  • From Drago on September 07, 2011
    This story is great! I love the idea of Pokemon trainers being able to understand their Pokemon.

    Please write more!!!!!!!!!
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  • From Drago on June 03, 2011
    I love the idea of this story and can not wait for more!
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  • From Lantus71 on May 18, 2011
    So far, so good. I like Dai, and Scald isn't too annoying so far. I like the explanations of the world, it shows what you are doing with the normal pokemon world and what you are changing. I like the Companion idea; it gets touched on, a little, in the main series, but it's nice to see you exploring the idea some. Also, I like the Elite Four angle; sure, everyone wants to be Champion, but you never hear about the others...

    Also, nice choice in giving Dai's ass as her primary attribute. As a Dawn fan, I totally approve.

    I'll be keeping an eye out, hope this goes somewhere good!
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  • From Rockinmuffin on May 04, 2011
    Awww, I love chapter 2. The incident with the mess hall made me laugh. Also, I think you did the sex scene very tastefully. With Dai's practical personality, it made sense that she got her first time out of the way, and Scald was so tender and sweet. :) It was adorable.

    I'm glad that you updated and I definitely can't wait to see what happens next. I'm especially anxious to find out what other pokemon will join Dai's team.
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  • From RAW19 on May 02, 2011
    You had me at Companion...

    No, really this story is awesome. The humor, the sex, the flow and feel. Everything just seems so awesome and interesting and right. I feel you did a most excellent job here and i certainly look forward to more.
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  • From sillyneko345 on April 27, 2011
    I'm enjoying this fic a lot :) The interaction between Dai and her new poke-pal is very cute and entertaining. Also, I don't think I've ever seen a totodile star in an adult story. Eevee, yes. Pikachu, yes. Cute and fluffy things, yes. But a totodile? He may not be fluffy, but you make him adorable and witty, and I like that.

    Great job so far, I'll be checking for updates!
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  • From Rockinmuffin on March 19, 2011
    An interesting and well-written poke-fic that actually has some semblance of a plot? On MY Adultfanfiction.net? It's more likely tan you think.

    I'm loving this so far and I honestly can't wait to see more. Daisuke seems to be down-to-earth and relatable enough of a character while the Tododile has just the right amount of spunk. Also, he's honest to the point of bluntness; you got to have some respect for that.

    Seriously, I can't wait to see what you have in store for us next. :)
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