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Reviews for The Data trap

By : lordkrakenknight
  • From ANON - un named on May 29, 2011
    Nice to have an update. I hope that Cartherine will make it to Tai's party. You did say she would be in the story. and Tai's party could use a blond
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  • From LordPatamon on May 14, 2011
    Do I smell some Patamon/Gatomon action here? I really hope for some ^^

    It was really nice to see Gatomon going to Patamon for help, usually on lemon series she doesn't goes much to Patamon for anything ^^U

    Really interesting fic :)
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  • From ANON - un named on May 09, 2011
    Looks like Tai is going to have one big party. Should be lots of action there.
    I hope that Ken and Yolie come to am understaing I did like that pairing
    Also LadyDevimon looking like a Human I can see where this is headed
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  • From BrenTenkage on May 03, 2011
    Do I need to say how great the chapter was? No I don't, keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - un named on April 26, 2011
    Looks like Matt is starting to break free of the mind controll. Still I hope that he stays with Jun.
    I like Taiora too much for Matt to get back with Sora
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  • From BrenTenkage on April 24, 2011
    Lady Devilmon...ok this isn't gonna end well....well it might if you look at it from Tai's point of view LOL
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  • From ANON - Digimon_enslaver on April 19, 2011
    I read the fic now for a long time and I have to congratulate you for the work so far. You know how to write a very intriguing mind control story, that also manages to shift the focus of the story between characters. And the plotpoint with the seven demons is also interesting and I hpe to see something in the end with it.

    As for future chapters, may I suggest a few ideas?

    1. I think you could actually do something with Gatomon in the story beside her turning into a fucktoy for Hawkman. After all, she can also digivolve into Angewomon, so I think the idea of her -in the name of mistress Yolei- seducing a few boys who might try to stop them or being some sort of "reward" for Davis for his service could be possible.

    2. I would actually love to see a scene in which Matt tries to convince TK that nothing is wrong (perhaps while being on the hone as Jun sucks him off) , which would lead to him having a talk with Tai and Tai realizing that he -now having no problem to use his powers less subtle- has to do something. By somethng I mean that he "convinces" Matt to show that it is completely okay to just screw a girl randomly, perhaps by offering TK to fuck Jun with him. at the moment Matt would make such an offer, Tai would over his laptop slowly change TKs morality, turning him in the end in a depraved version of himself that has no problem to share some quality time with his brother, his girls or any random slut he may encounter.
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  • From BrenTenkage on April 19, 2011
    So Mimi on a Full Moon will transform into a slut LOL? This should be interesting
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  • From ANON - cool guy on April 16, 2011
    if you need more female digidestin you should add Catherine from episode 41 of season 2. It is clare that both Tai and Tk like her and they both have already kissed her
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  • From ANON - cool guy on April 16, 2011
    If you need more female digidestin you should add Catherine from episode 41 of season 2. it's clear that Tai likes her and has already kissed her. Same goes For TK
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  • From Groeno101 on April 15, 2011
    I like it. It's fun to watch Tai and the girls become more and more depraved. And I'm interested in seeing where this will go, from mostly sex to having to actually deal with consequences. Whether they might return to their senses and have to live with the knowledge of whats been happening or stay under the influence of the program and be oblivious to the big bad coming their way. Considering Ken's prior role as an antagonist and who was controlling him, that program was sent to him to achieve some kind of malicious intent, only I don't think whomever sent it intended it to end up in Tai's hands so it will be interesting what happens.

    But in the mean time, I just love the girls becoming complete sluts. Mind Changer's ability to make them into cock hungry nymphos is just so awesome. Though I do like how you've kept Tai reserved with it, like he still respects his friends and though he could change their personalities outright tries to keep them mostly the same. Keeping Tai from doing these things right away and instead slowing easing into them to showcase his and the girls character development and fading morality was just excellent. And I'm glad that he didn't decide to add Kari to his harem right away and immediately start making changes to her. Kari's interaction with Tai is my favorite part of this so far. Blowing his load on his sister's face twice and she just shrugged it off, amazing. The "I'm a slut" line after getting her third facial from Tai I loved that so much. I also love that even with Tai's roleplaying with Sora and his transformation experience that it ended up being Kari that made the first move in order to be Tai's fuck toy. Like I said, it's fun to watch them become more depraved, and with Tai getting turned on and getting off on the idea of impregnating his own sister he just keeps falling to new depths. Adding that he didn't want to be a father yet and the fact his morals keep falling I get the feeling he might eventually do it.

    This is definitely one of my favorite stories. I'm excited that we'll get to see more of those special attributes with Mimi coming up. I'd really like to hear more about those, and more about what the program can change in general, like since it can change someone's gender can it change their age, what fetishes can it give, can it increase how much Tai cums per shot? Things like that.
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  • From ANON - Wolfbane420 on April 14, 2011
    If this place is for the 7 Demon Lords then there should only be 6 of the 7 still locked up because Daemon got out. Now if you don't believe me check Wiki for info on them.
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  • From ANON - un named on April 14, 2011
    when you say it is obvious who the bad guy is if you watch the last season
    do you mean data squad or Xros Wars which is airing in japan right now
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  • From BrenTenkage on April 14, 2011
    I got an idea who is the villian, but I will wait and see
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  • From Rageknight on April 12, 2011
    And so the plote thickens, this is really becoming one of my favorite stories, keep up the good work
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