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Reviews for The Data trap

By : lordkrakenknight
  • From ANON - pettrum on April 12, 2011
    More anal, more incest, and more chapters please :-)
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  • From ANON - un named on April 12, 2011
    Grate as always I just hope for some TK and Kari action.

    also one of the parings that I like is Izzy/Mimi

    I also hope for a big orgy like in chapter 2 but with more of the new people
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  • From WindsofChaos on April 12, 2011
    Well we finally see that something bad is going down in the Digital World, probably because of this "Mind Changer" thing. Though I have to admit it's an effective idea. Get all the Destined screwing each other, then just traipse out while they are too screwed up to notice anything. Though I wonder what's going to go down when the effects get erased. I can expect an "OH MY GOD! I SLEPT WITH MY SISTER!" from Tai.
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  • From BrenTenkage on April 12, 2011
    Oh boy, this many not end well. I smell a flashback...or maybe its just me *sniffs self*
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  • From WindsofChaos on April 10, 2011
    Please, don't be too hard on Mimi in the next chapter, I'm a Joe/Mimi supporter and don't want him getting damaged goods...
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  • From BrenTenkage on April 06, 2011
    Butterscotch sex kitten

    I laughed so hard with that line, also Kari cumming up (parden the pun) and saying "Hi I'm a slut, fuck me" also made me laugh, keep up the good work
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  • From Rageknight on April 06, 2011
    Last part at the end made me laugh, can't wait to see whats next
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  • From ANON - Nobodie on April 05, 2011
    Interesting MC story, Not really my cup of tea, but I'm wondering how this will end. From your title, The Data TRAP, I have a feeling that this program is going to become a problem somewhere down the line. I'm hoping I'm right, and that things may go back to 'normal' (though Sora being with Tai still is fine in my book, specially if Matt still has Jun) maybe Davis will be the one to actually bring about that end, since he seems to be immune to illusions and mind controlling effects in the anime. Tell the truth it would be awesome if Davis didn't help Yolie's plans, sensing something is very wrong with the situation.

    Anyway, I think I will continue to read this either way, it's intriguing, and I like how you make it where while their minds are being F***ed with, you try to let them all still be happy.
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  • From ANON - pettrum on April 03, 2011
    hawt
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  • From Rageknight on April 03, 2011
    Wow, Ihave to admit this one was definitly intreasting to read. Keep up the good work
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  • From BrenTenkage on April 03, 2011
    In case you are wondering why I like Mimi...well...growing up I hated the bitch, for always bitching about her problems...just thought it be funny to see her get her cum-uppance. Anyway good updates, can't wait for more.
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  • From Rageknight on April 02, 2011
    I like what you've done to yolei and how she has planing all of this. Can't wait to seewhats next
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  • From ANON - pettrum on April 02, 2011
    This is awesome - best smut I've read on AFF in a long time. Keep up the good work!
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  • From BrenTenkage on March 31, 2011
    Can't wait to see Kari fucked like a nice litte slut, and then we got Mimi...oh I can't wait to see her become a public cum bucket
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  • From ANON - un named on March 31, 2011
    Sorry to hear that you wll be busy for some time.
    this story is one of the best that this sight has had for some time.
    One thing I am woundering about is what were Kari fellings for Tk and Davis before she was mind controled by Yolie.
    I wonder what Tai is going to do with Tk and Davis considering his new power
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