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Reviews for What's Your Fantasy?

By : LadyMoonStone
  • From ANON - Sageofoblivion on December 18, 2012
    I was not a bad fic went trought some others they seemed to have been written by 8year olds to simple, O.C and forced if this is bad for you I can say that compared to them is really good.
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  • From JOler on July 25, 2011
    Sigh ... Sorry I made the request ... Guess it can't be done because:

    1) it's too difficult to do.
    2) it's too boring.
    Or
    3) I'm not a fan on the other site so the suggestion/request doesn't count.

    No matter which is the reason ... This is still a cute ficlet.

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  • From JOler on July 05, 2011
    Please continue this series ... The conversations and the reactions the answers do or can cause are so enjoyable and in character. I would love to see similar conversations from Kougaiji's camp since Lirin is coming of age just like Goku is and would have her own fantasies, curiosities, and questions. I'm sure Goku has many questions he hasn't asked yet as well. It would be interesting to see how both sets of adults get to and through the curiosities and questions (and possible explorations) concerning that most unnerving of topics that every adolescent's parent or guardian must sooner or later tackle ... "The Talk"(about sex).

    I hope all is going well and that you can get a new chapter out soon.

    By the way ... Lirin might perch on Sanzo's shoulders but you KNOW it's Goku she's watching with rapt attention while he fights her brother ... I just wonder who will figure it out first or what would happen if those two accidentally got stuck together alone for any length of time ...
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  • From JOler on June 26, 2011
    I can hardly wait for your next installment in this series. Especially if we get to see Kougaiji's group having 'interesting' conversations with a chipper and clueless Lirin giving her big brother Kougaiji a nervous breakdown and going nuts.
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  • From JOler on June 22, 2011
    Please. It is so hard to find authors whom I actually enjoy reading in the Sai Yuki fandom and you are one of the few. I'd love to see more from you, especially rare pairings, or those who are usually poorly written, since I have the feeling you could do an excellent job of writing them and actually finish a fic instead of leaving it hanging half finished because of cold feet, coping out and doing Goku/Lirin as complete PWP with the grown-ups being clueless and no consequences for the unprotected relations (the potential for a shy and hesitant first romance are so obvious ... He's curious but unsure in that area while she's sheltered and innocent ... And both sets of adults are highly concerned about the youngest members of the group ~ though Sanzo tries to hide it by being grouchy).

    Another cop out I get tired of is Kougaiji/Sanzo being treated as abusive or rape or BDSM ... They may take a while to get together once the scripture issue is past but their personalities just don't seem to be quite that violent towards each other without stepmom's manipulative influence. Reading the manga and watching the anime it almost appears that Hakkai views Yaone as a second Kannan while Yaone is extremely drawn to him as well but due to being on opposite sides they do their best to resist the attraction when the others are nearby.

    Let's face it, Gojyo and Doku (his half brother) are both at least part kappa and that means a high libido as well as a penchant for the ladies. Due to the lack of cannon females
    Gojyo is always paired with a guy (usually Hakkai and on occasion Sanzo) and his brother is all but forgotten. If those two got together once hostilities ended don't you think they'd
    have a night on the town filled with wine women and song ... And a playful competition to see which one could either satisfy more women in one night or (each taking turns with the
    same woman) which one was more pleasurable (could see a somewhat smart woman giving them each high scores in different areas and saying she needs a few do-overs to
    make a final decision ... Doubt either brother would balk at that suggestion).

    Anyway, enough sighing and ranting about other authors. I love how you have such a great grasp of the Sanzo party boys. I'd love to see your take on the Kougaiji party members and on the way the adults would act if both 'kids' disappeared or got caught 'playing doctor' ... or more.

    Mofaf1

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  • From JOler on June 20, 2011
    Please continue this little ficlet. I'd love to see Kou and company having a similar talk. Maybe if Sanzo's group had a similar fourth question going around and the groups met in mid-convo (both distracted, a bit turned on, and tensions a bit high in a horny way) it could have interesting results. Too bad Goku answered so soon because it would have been great to have seen Lirin's reaction to his curiosity about her, and it would have been fun to see Kou lose it when he heard Goku's interest in his beloved baby sister. Kou might find new energy reserves to put into the fight (no fair taking Goku's limiter off though). Kinda wonder if Yaone has it bad for one or more of the guys in either group (highly suspect she has it bad for Hakkai but never know). Wonder if Lirin has it bad for Goku or if she fantasizes about Sanzo or one of the others. Would love to see Gojyo and his brother go out on the town and see who was better with the women (am sure those two would enjoy it). Gotta wonder about Kou's taste since he has Yaone but doesn't seem to have made any advances ...

    Please show us your take on any of this. I totally love your writing style.
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  • From JOler on June 19, 2011
    Love the ficlet ... Should have made it a second chapter of the first to make it easier to read them back to back. (that's not a criticism just a comment).

    Wonder if any of the boys will get to live out any part of their fantasies. Still hoping to see the Kougaiji side having similar discussions (and Kougaiji's reaction to Lirin tossing in her answers ... Especially if they all think she's in bed asleep instead of lurking in the dark room on the other side of an open door ~ i.e. sneaking a snack from the kitchen or something).

    Would be kinda nice to see both of the youngest pout and wander off because of all the dissing they get. Sort of wonder if the 'grown ups' will get a bit distressed and go looking for them...

    Thanks for the wonderful follow on ficlet.
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