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Reviews for Empathic Adventures

By : SSJ04Mewtwo
  • From ANON - ranger101764 on September 09, 2016

    you missed one pokemon om angie team, you forgot braivery.


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  • From ashben on January 07, 2016
    MISTY IS NOT NEED TO RAPED, SHE IS SAVED BY ASH IN LAST TIME, OR SHE ALSO BE ASH HAREM

    YOU NEED TO MAKE ASH IS POWERFULL POKEMON ESPECIALLY PIKACHU, HOW U FORGET, PIKACHU IS BEAT THE REGICE AND LATIOS, THEN HE EASILY BEAT ANY UNLEGENDARY POKEMON EASILY

    CHARIZARD IS BEAT ARTICUNO, ITS MEAN HE DESTROY ANY LEGENDARY POKEMON EXCEPT OF SOME MORE POWERFULL LIKE LUGIA, HO-OH, DAILGA, PALKIA, KYOGRE, GIRATINA, MEWTWO AND ARCEUS AND THE KALOS LEGENDARIES U NOT INTRODUCE THEN I NOT MENTION IT

    ABOUT BEATING DARKRAI, SCEPTILE IS BEAT DARKRAI, WHEN HE FIRST TIME BATTLE, IN THE SECOND TIME HE NOT BEAT, HE DESTROY IT

    OR MOST IMPORTANT THING U GO VERY SLOW, IN STARTING U GO VERY FAST, BUT AFTER U GO SLOW,

    BUT THIS IS GOOD STORY IF U EDIT THIS STORY, THEN ITS NOT GOOD ITS THE PERFECT,

    OR U ALSO CHANGE MEINFOO INTO LUCARIO, BECAUSE ONLY LUCARIO IS ALWAYS MENTION AS AURA GUARDIAN POKEMON, LUCARIO TEACH THE AURA NOT OTHER POKEMON
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  • From ashben on January 07, 2016
    YOU HAVE NEED TO EDIT STORY FOR MAKE IT PERFECT
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  • From ANON - Fred on March 19, 2015
    So far the story is pretty good. However May and Dawn need more dialogue. It seems the story so far is focusing on Cilian, Iris, Annabel, and the other tomboyish girl.
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  • From ANON - the hotdog guy on January 04, 2013
    Just wondering when is the next chapter coming out i've reread this story 3 times all 69 chapters
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  • From ANON - Nauran on September 22, 2012
    Rest in peace, ssj04mewtwo.

    Although we only know you through the internet and only by a single word, condolences can still be given.
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  • From Martialartsmaster on March 11, 2012
    Good chap, in the next chap you should have brandon battle anable in a full 6on6 with brandon winning even though anable used her rikou but having been impressed by how much her skill has improved brandon lets her continue traveling with ash. Then paul can have his remach with brandon witch paul looses.
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  • From Martialartsmaster on March 05, 2012
    Good chap but I think you could have made the AshXZoey scene longer and rougher
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  • From ANON - AuroraMoon on February 02, 2012
    ive been reading this awhile, but ive felt i had nothing to say until now, with Nick, Amu, and Ami's appearance...if there's a gap between games and anime after Unova's done, you plan to drag Ash and co to Orre? ive felt its been underappreciated...and, i'd love to see how you handle aura in contrast to shadow pokemon, along with analbel's empathy in regards to shadow pokemon. it might provide an interesting writing challenge to better yourself with.

    also, Nick calling one of his lovers 'mama', and the other 'sis', i loved that. i'd read their continued adventures just for more of that stuff.
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  • From Martialartsmaster on January 26, 2012
    Interesting chap, glad to see you used my seggestion for Anible's nickname
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  • From Martialartsmaster on January 23, 2012
    Ok not as good as the others, infact it was kinda boring. I do have some more suggestions: Ash could give Anabel and Angie nicknames as well like "Cunning Espeon" and "Galant Braviary" respectivly. And you could have Zoey's deerling evolve into Sawsbuck before she releases it or it decides it wants to come along with her, Zoey and Angie could have a tomboy rivelry. Wouldn't be daughters-in-law not daughter-in-laws?
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  • From Martialartsmaster on January 23, 2012
    Good chap I like "raw, passionate fucking" how Zoey is a pervert and how you portray iris as a ditz. Keep up the good work.
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  • From Martialartsmaster on January 21, 2012
    Another good chap, I've already given you a bunch of story Ideas just look through my previous reviews
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  • From Martialartsmaster on January 20, 2012
    Good chap and I've already given you a bunch of chapter ideas so USE THEM!
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  • From Martialartsmaster on January 12, 2012
    Another long chap, glad to know more about aura. keep up the good work.
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