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Reviews for Dawn has two mommies

By : Witchan21
  • From PokemonPr0nPal3000 on September 01, 2011
    I lost all ability to take this seriously at this line:

    "So, dad passed away, I see... What happened next?"

    I actually started laughing there. I was trying to take it somewhat seriously before, since I've written weirder things, but...man, this is obviously a comedy, and it's a strange one...but yeah, you've got some very funny lines here. And ending it with ice cream...I mean...wow.
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