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Reviews for The Depravity of Suzumiya Haruhi

By : OkibiOhki
  • From SniperJoe on July 12, 2018

    Probably the best Melancholy lemon fic I've ever read. This site, ffn, whatever.

     

    A very interesting premise. Also reminds me of the mystery elements of the book, and the way they are presented usually.

    I do wish Nagato's actions in CH1 were cleared up earlier. But it's just a mark of how engaged I was.


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  • From ANON - pk on January 11, 2015
    Please consider continuing this story. It's very well written, well visualized and frankly has a more cohesive plot than 90% of the G to T rated fiction I've run across. It's definitely in the top 10% of Haruhi fanfiction written period. You had me hooked at the ending of the first chapter and kept me hooked the whole way through. The idea that Haruhi is subconsciously controlling what Kyon is thinking is an idea that I've never seen considered in a fic before and it intrigues me greatly.
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  • From ANON - Heika on January 13, 2014
    A number of things. Am I correct in assuming kyon committed suicide in ch1?

    How big is Kyon? THE percentages used for mass and hardness are not very good indicators by themselves.

    I have not read Haruhi in a LONG time and I only got half maybe 2/3 of the way through the series chronologically before it was taken down.

    Am I seriously going to get a lecture from Sasaki while I'm having sex with Nagato? This really _is_ like a bizarre h-manga!
    hahahahahahahahhhhahahaa

    I see nagato lecturing Haruhi on how the harem is set up as a pack with HAruhi and Kyon being Alphas and Koizumi being a Guardian who gets his sex from women he seduces to better protect the pack.

    Going to upload this review here. Need to fine print your chapters. I have skimmed sections due to reading other stories as well. Two monitors make a lot of things possible.
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  • From ANON - verifiaman on December 13, 2013
    Are you still there? if so are you doing reqeusts? my email is verifiaman@yahoo.com
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  • From ANON - Siar on September 01, 2013
    Very nice story (exciting lemons + good plot)! I enjoyed it alot, especially Sasaki and Haruhi part^^ Also, what do you think of adding some Asakura?
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  • From ANON - TheBiz on August 15, 2013
    Didn't notice that you had updated this fantastic as usual.
    Nagato/Mikuru is super adorable and I want to see some more. Most of this is a mix of the usual super fluffy smutty goodness we've been getting from chapter 3 but remember that you have this story written with a very dark premise and that's something I think you should explore at some point to mix it up.
    I can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - StudentResearcher on July 10, 2013
    It continued! I think this new chapter might do with a little editing (for instance, you overuse _these things_), but the content's pretty good overall, and the character interactions are as cute as ever. I'm eager to read what happens next.
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  • From ANON - StudentResearcher on February 01, 2013
    I love this fic. I love it, I love it, I love it. Please continue it!
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  • From ANON - Ranger on December 18, 2012
    Fucking good. Really wish you would update this fix soon. There really are not enough MoHS stories.
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on October 07, 2012
    The eroticism of these chapters is pure gold. I also have a fetish for cum-inflation and impregnation, and Mikuru's pleas to get knocked up are always fun. I don't suppose you have any lactation or breast growth scenes in mind? With the threesome with Yuki coming up, it'd be really hot to see Mikuru leak milk, and maybe Yuki swell and lactate as well to compete.
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  • From ANON - Leeslane on September 12, 2012
    I was worried this was dead, glad to see it updated. The idea of what Haruhi and Sasaki might say to each other is interesting, especially if Haruhi's still mentally repressing details. Gonna have interesting fallout if the world reverts back.
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  • From Leeslane on January 16, 2012
    I'm glad to see that this is still alive. This chapter makes me wonder what exactly Haruhi wishes for. Obviously this is from Kyon's POV but does what does she want from this, even if she won't admit it?
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  • From Leeslane on September 27, 2011
    Sasaki! I think this is maybe one of two or three total that have her in any way paired with Kyon and almost definitely the only lemon. Should we assume the cervix thing is from Haruhi as well? No offense, but in reality even if you could get that far in, it would just cause a lot of pain. As for what's next...I don't want to write your fic for you (especially when it's pretty good) but what about dates?
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  • From RisingPhoenix on September 15, 2011
    So yeah this is pretty much a great bit of work. I don't often sit down to actually read something with plot on this site, but I'm actually interested in where this one is going. Partially because I love Sasaki's character and feel like she's not used often enough, but also because, more so than pretty much any haruhi fic involving sex, it's rather close to being in character.

    Looking forward to more.
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  • From Leeslane on September 05, 2011
    Ah, Sasaki. For a character I love she seems to get a lot of bad press. Sadly no roleplaying in this one, but at least Haruhi can be patient. Out of curiosity, was Mikuru really just 'roleplaying' at the end? Hope the next chapter arrives soon!
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