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Reviews for It Wasn't Supposed To Be This Way

By : SpiralBreeze
  • From azalea33 on November 28, 2014
    Just wanted to say that I found this and enjoyed it. I see you are still writing, and would love to read more of this story if you ever write more.
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  • From ANON - aFan on November 04, 2012
    PLEASE continue soon, i love this story TracyxMisty in this rocks,and though ash is a dick its still awesome, please update soon
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 10, 2012
    OMG soooo goood!!! Stayed up till 1:00 reading it all.... Wow very well done. any more?
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  • From ANON - Annika Day on June 22, 2012
    This is AWESOME, Spiral. I LOVE it. Dramatic, Romantic, and very.... INTENSE. It's awesome. Keep up the AMAZING work, I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 17, 2012
    Can I just say how much I love this story? I never really thought much of Tracey in the anime, but you have really brought him to life! I love the constantly differing levels of tension throughout the story. You have gotten me to care for the characters and their feelings in this work and that is one of the things that I look for as a reader. I want to turn back time and make it be Tracey that is with Misty that night instead of Ash. Tracey obviously cares so much for her and you do an excellent job of portraying that. I cannot wait for the twelfth chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - gcbearclaw on March 22, 2012
    hello again! sorry i havent responded in a while but ive been incredibly busy. keep up the good work!
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  • From kagomeisawsome26 on February 19, 2012
    woot! after i finished reading chapter 9 you updated! I am glad ash is stepping up, but i wish misty would be with Tracy! cant wait to read more!
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  • From kagomeisawsome26 on February 19, 2012
    wow ash is being a total jerk..now i really hope misty goes to Tracy! good work..kinda creeped out that the head of team rocket is ash's dad...creepy...cant wait for the next chapter!
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  • From kagomeisawsome26 on February 07, 2012
    glad you updated again! was worried it was gonna be a while because of all the new changes! this made my day! I freaked out when i thought there was gonna be a miscarriage! I almost cried. Glad you didn't go that route. I would have been mad as hell if you went that route. So Ash is coming back? Not sure I am happy about that. I want Tracy and Misty together! Lol.. hope you are working on the next chapter and I am getting ideas for a Pokemon fic and was wondering if maybe we could collaborate? just a suggestion lol :D
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  • From kagomeisawsome26 on January 23, 2012
    DUN DUN DUN!!! XD this made my night! sweet! O loved it! Cant wait for the next chapter and i hope misty says she loves him too and screws ash. I always liked ash/misty but for you i love tracy/misty lol
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  • From underoath1991 on January 16, 2012
    excellence! the story is taking more twists and turns as the plot thickens. i am excited for more!! havent been on lately because of work but i wanted to read the new chapters and review. keep up the good work, and best wishes!

    bear
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  • From kagomeisawsome26 on January 15, 2012
    I laughed hard when Team rocket came back! lol...they are too funny...lol Good chapter :D I guess at 4 months pregnant women cant have sex anymore and need to use dildos..cant wait for the next chapter
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  • From kagomeisawsome26 on January 09, 2012
    Yea you did another chapter! I am feeling sorry for Tracy. I think he would be better but i dont know how ash is gonna take it so i will just keep that to myself. Cant wait for more and i hope ash shows up soon :D
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  • From underoath1991 on January 05, 2012
    Hello! Glad to see I made your day=) I like making people smile. The story is even better progressing than I had expected it to, if that's any better? As far as a description of welding and its job description, I will try to give as good of one as I can. I used to work for a company that built mining equipment but they laid me off some time ago. But here goes:

    The welding process we used was called mig welding. google a picture of a mig welder and you'll see what it looks like. We used Lincoln PowerMIG 350 welders at the shop. In my opinion, they're the best. Mig welding has almost become the standard for production work, which was what I did. We had a quota of four sets of handrailing and four base platforms a day, and any extra we built we got paid commission.

    A typical day was waking up at 4:30AM to be there by 5AM, which was when we started. I got up, got dressed (They gave us uniforms after 90 days) and brewed a pot of coffee while I took a quick shower. Afterwards, I put it into my thermos and grabbed my lunch out of the fridge that I had to prepare the night before because of obvious time constraints, and haul ass to work. We worked 5AM to 5PM and nightshift worked 5PM to 5AM. Occasionally I'd have to switch shifts because of either a rise or drop in production. I got paid $11 an hour.

    I'd get there, punch in, and head to the shop floor to meet my foreman (The boss) and the other people who worked in my area of the shop. They also hired painters, laborers, assemblers, and machinists. The building was a big warehouse with the welding shop in the front and the paint line/assembly line in the back. We always had a blueprint and a stack of raw materials waiting for us, and we'd look over the print and get to work. Building the equipment was simple; we'd just bend and cut the parts as specified by the blueprint and weld them together and send them to the back of the shop to be finished. If you need to know any more, just google mig welding and read a bit. It should explain anything I might have left out. Next I will discuss benifits.

    We got health insurance along with dental, eye and life insurance and uniforms after a 90-day probationary period. Uniforms consisted of 5 navy blue long sleeve work shirts with a patch bearing our names over the right pocket and the company emblem over the left, and flame-retardant blue jeans. Steel-toed work boots were required and the company would give us a 'boot allowance' of $90 every two years.

    That's about the best I can do for right now. I love this story and I'm excited to see how it pans out. This is by far the coolest request acceptance I've ever had! Thank you so much! I did have a little tweak I wanted to add in if possible? Maybe you can weave in the song 'More like the movies' by Dr. Hook in there somewhere? I love that song, and it fits what you've written so far. Lyrics should be on the internet somewhere. Again, thank you, and post on my thread if anything else comes up. You're doing an outstanding job=)

    Bear
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  • From underoath1991 on January 03, 2012
    One word... AMAZING. You have left me utterly speechless and longing for more! I seriously can't wait till the story progresses and I'm dying to see which job Ash will end up with! (Hopefully welder or automechanic, as I am a certified welder and I work in a garage=)) Great, no, FANTASTIC job on my request! I'm soooooo excited!! By the way, if you need any info on either job, post on my challenge thread and I will gladly help you out. My email doesnt work, and i dont have enough time to write anymore, sadly.... but thank you so much! i really enjoyed reading this fic. keep up the good work!

    Bearclaw
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