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Reviews for Succubus Love

By : Saiga123
  • From ANON - Reviewer 12 on December 18, 2013
    Like the dirtiness of this work. More please!!!!!
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  • From ANON - omnimon11 on December 17, 2013
    You just LOVE corrupting Shinobu past the point of no return, don't you?
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  • From Ryvius on December 17, 2013
    Speaking honestly, I was enjoying this story very much till the idea of Eukanaria whoring the girls out came up. It just ruins the relationship the characters have to me. Could you at least make it so that Eukanaria ensures the girls can't get pregnant or NTR'd by other guys?

    Otherwise, fun and enjoyable story.
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  • From KingofthePen on October 29, 2013
    Good god man! Where in the blazes is the next chapter?! Any who, I like the submissive take on Keitaro. You have made all us authors proud. Keep up the good work.
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  • From hamwi2000 on October 22, 2013
    Please update
    hamwi2000@hotmail.com
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  • From ANON - Player-1 on July 02, 2013
    Hot, though I have doubts about Keitaro selling out ANY of the girls.

    Either way, I hope Sarah finds her into the mix.
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  • From ANON - Leeslane on June 20, 2013
    Sorry but this honestly just feels too quick. Keitaro goes from his first time having sex to "I'll be your slave"?
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  • From ANON - ren on June 20, 2013
    Hmm...interesting turn of events, is all I can say in a nutshell. The latest chapter does suffice as an impromptu ending of sorts, as well setting the stage for a 2nd season. However, there are quite a number of loose ends. Smut and plot aren't mutually exclusive. :P

    I am not sure what exactly the Keitaro / Shinobu pairing brings to the party. Will we be seeing a sub-plot where the relationship between the both of them develop further?

    I am also interested to see where the other girls factor into this. They aren't bound into a contract like Keitaro. What I think you can consider doing for your next chapter (if there is one) is to establish their hierarchy when they wake up, and describe a typical day at the inn. IE: The succubus will assuredly be at the top of the pecking order. Where do the girls and Keitaro rank after her? Is Keitaro a slave to the other girls as well, the other way round, or a free-for-all when they are not tending to Eucatarina?

    Your writing is undoubtably very good. Don't take this the wrong way, but I think there comes a point when a reader skims through everything and goes..."Um, yeah, so? What's your point? Where is this story leading?" It's the same issue I have with "King of Molmol". Chapter after chapter of plotless sex with OOC girls who don't appear in the original cast at all. I can take your story, replace the lead character with any other name, and it wouldn't have lost anything.

    Just my 2 cents. Hope I haven't offended you.
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  • From Killerman83ca on May 06, 2013
    Can you please update chapter 9 as soon as you can. Please. I would love to see what happens next.
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  • From Ryvius on May 05, 2013
    Great fic so far.

    Lemons are great. Eukanaria is an entertaining character.

    Girl's I want to see more of are Mitsumi, Mokoto, Shinobu, Tsuruko, and Kanako.

    Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - verifiaman on May 05, 2013
    Do you do requests? my emails is verifiaman@yahoo.com
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  • From ANON - MAS on April 21, 2013
    Please update this story, it is realy good, I actualy like it much better than any of your other stuff, though I would like to see an update to "A Drunken Beguining
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  • From ANON - MAS on August 22, 2012
    Please for the love of god update, this is my favorate story on the entire site and I want to see what happens next. I wonder what will happen when the girls wake up in the morning how thier dreams will change how they act around Kietaro. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - MAS on August 19, 2012
    Please update this story, it is my favorate story on this site, and I have been waiting forever for you to update this.
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  • From ANON - majinbuu on August 06, 2012
    This is a great story so far, you are one of the best love Hina authors on this site. I am looking forward to what this succubus does to the other girls in the Hinata inn, like Shinobu and Kitsune. Looking forward to more soon, both of this and your other stories, King of Molmol and Hentai Sou.
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