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Reviews for Dreams

By : NyttyN
  • From ANON - Dale on November 05, 2013
    Hey Asshole Get off yo ass and write teh story, It's been a fucking year
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  • From Bartimeaus on December 01, 2012
    Love your story man and your writing style....but could you bold or " " the telepathic speech...it gets confusing to differtiate between thoughts and telepathy...im loving the plot....waiting for the next chapter..best of luck...
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  • From CyberDark on March 19, 2012
    I must say that I believe this story has potential. You seem to work hard to build dialogue and character development and it's an interesting idea to explore a relationship from the beginning like you are. I look forward to seeing the next chapter. If I may ask a question, could you clarify what you meant by the darker sort of stuff you mentioned in the first chapter? I'm not sure if you meant like more romance/real life style or the more nasty, gritty style.

    I look forward to watching this story evolve. Anxiously awaiting the next chapter.
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