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Reviews for A Friendly Wager

By : Almister
  • From ANON - Dialbean on September 25, 2016

    I wish you would update because this is frankly the best story I have read on this site just under one but yo should know I would love for you to continue 


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  • From ANON - Luigi on June 13, 2014
    This is one of the best stories I've read in a while. Definitely hope you keep up the good work.
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  • From anything708 on July 13, 2012
    grest story hope for more chapters was rellay enjoying it
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  • From microconj on July 06, 2012
    Tippity tappity type type type. Hi. I've been reading this and it's good. So there.
    No really, I enjoy stories with more of, you know, a story. I also like the sex side. It's a preference of mine when a pron is worth a story, to make the story and sex separate kind of. Writing styles I mean. Some ways of writing are better for a story, but there's some for erotica and I think this has the right balance. I usually don't like sexy poke fics without pokephilia, but this one was great, plus it kind of hinted at some. If not, my love's not conditional.
    *Spoiler* I liked the description of the tail. It's just in-depth enough to not make it boring, and just so to make it hotter. *Not spoiler*
    I like how you make Liz just naive enough so what Sasha does is new and exciting to her. I feel like I'm the indentured new pokemon trainer who can't wait to see what her master wants from her now, because it's always the height of my day.
    Alright, so you probably know, but I thought I'd tell you. Write more! Yeah...I'm done. silverlining out.
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  • From LesaleBloodraven on June 05, 2012
    In case anyone reads reviews besides the author, please skip mine. There are spoilers.

    First, allow to me apologize, but because of the fact that I read 5 chapters at once, I find it impractical to review 5 times just to comment on each character. However, let me give you praise on the story as a whole.

    I love what you've done with Sasha so far. I like how he masks his true identity with his laid-back attitude. While Pokemon has proven time and again that the Champion is never who the protagonist (the character, not the player) would expect, your writing has certainly deceived me, for one. I never would have guessed. I like how Sasha discusses Pokemon with such expertise. The idea of gym leaders rotating Pokemon was certainly something that never occurred to me, having always taken gym leaders for granted.

    Moving on, I also love how you narrate the battles, particularly the 3-on-3. That was amazing writing, right there.

    I'm also fond of the relationship between Liz and Sasha. He really manages to push her out of her comfort zone, which ultimately givers her a better experience. I am very excited for the rest of this story, and I hope you continue writing. I rarely write reviews for this site, but I simply could not read this story without giving my praise.
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  • From RAW19 on June 04, 2012
    Quite a good fic. I like how Sasha is both annoying as hell, yet strangely likeable, and Liz is all kinds of fun too. I look forward to more. Most excellent.
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  • From PhoenixHelix on June 01, 2012
    By god, this is perhaps one of the best written Pokemon fics ive read in recent weeks; im surprised its not been reviewed more. I hope you keep going until its completed, its got the makings for an epic and its definitely one of my favorites as of now.

    Keep at it! looking forward to your next chapter, if you're looking for ideas i can come up with plenty.
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