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Reviews for Alone time

By : kagomeisawsome26
  • From ANON - Lu on June 05, 2013
    Well... Since i started reading i wasnīt taking seriously this, one of the reasons is you only watched the anime and didnīt read the manga and i hardly like fics based in the anime. Now, i couldnīt read anymore when you used the mushrooms, i donīt get how people could even like that chapter if they like Ranma and Akane, i mean, why? They are not them! If i would like a lovey dovey pairing, i wouldnīt be reading something about them but some shoujo idk. Is not that hard to write lemon and keep their personality i promise. Tltr; you just killed Ranma and Akane essence, and obviously the sexual tension between them making them all lovey dovey and making that in a M fic is definitely a big NO
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  • From RogueMudblood on March 27, 2013

    One, wallotext, kags.

    Two, asks and said both used - please pick a tense. Didn't read it, just skimmed it. Please fix it.


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