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From Steelrush on July 28, 2012
Chapter 17 review:

"The war against the Nazis, the heroic rescues, Lucas gets a new lady (Doesn't he always?)"

LOL

And geez, I feel bad for Shyanne. The girls certainly have it rough in these stories.

YEAH! Like in past records of history (in real life), the Nazis are getting what they deserve, in the form of getting blown to bits by the little bombs from the Mario games!

Crap, that alternate reality is incredibly morbid. The nazis there are almost as evil as Team Armageddon...

Heheheheheh, another scene with Alex and his woman. XD

Like I said before, Lucas is the king of ladies men.

And, I really didn't expect Paul to get a woman, this was a surprise to me. :P

Good chapter, and an interesting end as well. Update when you can-
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From Steelrush on July 27, 2012
Chapter 16 review:

Now, I most certainly enjoyed the beginning. Leaving off right after Lucas's..."session" with Raye. XD

I kinda agree with Mina about Paul, I didn't think he'd become a nice guy...like, ever. I did not think it was possible.

Now Arceus has a new mate, huh? The guys in this story are getting luckier every chapter. :D

Sergei's punishment was far too soft. However, I do think using him as a tool to repair the things he destroyed would be a good idea.

Arceus saves more lives once again, now I enjoy that. :D

Whoa...That was one gnarly reaction Arcuelulu gave out. o____o

And that scene with Shylulu and Lucas, now that was wild.

Good chapter, and the end was rather...interesting. Update when possible-
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From Steelrush on July 27, 2012
Chapter 15 review:

Oh, god, these sexist criminals are definitely evil, that's for certain. I would really applaud them getting brutally punished for what they did to the sailor scouts. I currently can't come up with a word for just how wrong those actions were.

I didn't think I'd see Dr. Thalberg do it with Shylulu, that's quite a surprise. o_o

The Sailor Scouts being part of Lucas's harem, I like that idea for some reason. XD

Heheheh, I'm surprised that they love Lucas already, he's one lucky guy!

NICE chapter, and I liked the positive ending too. Excellent job, and now I will read the next!
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From Steelrush on July 27, 2012
Chapter 14 review:

Ha ha ha ha! I most certainly ENJOYED the beginning! XD

Oh yes, oh yes, oh yeeeeeeeesssssssssssss!

Oh, poor Anne. When she screamed, I gained an odd vivid image of that in my mind. But still, I felt rather bad for her.

Alright, Barry's here! That guy's cool in my opinion. :D

The sexist criminals are back again! Damn, it's one evil group after another!

One thing I didn't quite get; how come the Sailor Scouts weren't able to use their powers to fend off the atheist criminals? Meh, I guess I'll find out later.

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From Steelrush on July 27, 2012
Chapter 13:

Sergei does not deserve any sympathy or forgiveness. What he did was completely unacceptable.

Arceus seems like the target of evil's aggression. Thank goodness Team Armageddon didn't get him, they would have taken him offline indefinitely.

I have a feeling Lucas is going to have quite a lot of ladies in his harem.

And, is Alex's woman who I think she is?

Wait a minute, did Lucas cry? o_o

I didn't think I'd catch him doing that, he seems a lot tougher.

Alright, that was a very good chapter in my opinion. The end was pretty good as well-
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From Steelrush on July 27, 2012
Chapter 12 review:

Those atheists are a lot like the ones on yahoo (in real life). Cruel, heartless, spineless, and incredibly megalomaniacal.

I think their punishments were far too lenient, considering what they did.

Man, Quetzalcoatl is being such a jerk in this chapter, and all over something that happened centuries ago...

Interesting, Lucas seems to have adopted a tradition I already have (catching legendary Pokemon in luxury balls).

Speaking of Lucas, it's crazy how many women he gets to bang on a daily basis. XD

Oh, not again! Arceus is getting tortured once more, this time it's by the hypocritical control-freak atheists.

Somebody should force the atheist leader to get a sex-change, so that Reed can make him suffer for what he attempted to do. Well, hopefully he'll get what he deserves in the later chapters. Onto the next one-
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From Steelrush on July 24, 2012
Chapter 11 review:

So....much...sex. XD

Lucas keeps getting more ladies all the time, he's the master of ladies men! :D

And...Odin must be insane, talking to God that way at first. o_o

Doesn't he know what God could do to him if he wanted to?

At the end, that was an intuitive way Arceus had of restoring life to the sea. This makes me interested in what chapter 12 has to offer.
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From Steelrush on July 24, 2012
Man, what happened to these women...Team Armageddon would have probably recruited the atheist criminals even though they're humans.

Alex wasn't kidding when he said Lucas was an intercourse god.

...More female demons? o_o

Ah geez, Lucas didn't deserve that punishment!

Is the May in this chapter the same one from the Pokemon world?

Oh, I especially enjoyed this chapter. XD
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From Steelrush on July 24, 2012
Chapter 9 review:

Whoa...Poor Melanie, having her body messed up like that. Good thing Lucas is nice to her...

The Pokemon Rangers showed up too, huh? The punishments the atheist criminals are getting are far too lenient.

I feel rather bad for Mary as well. :(

Heh, I wonder if Lucas truly knows how lucky he is. XD

This chapter was a little saddening, but that didn't sap the quality of it.

Onto to the next one-
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From Steelrush on July 24, 2012
...Unborn children being killed! That's SO messed up!

DAMN! Reed's the one who deserves those punishments, not Nayru and Farore!

I was certainly entertained when Lucas had his Pokemon torture the drunk guy, along with the Charlotte freezing the pimp. The women abusers getting what they deserve is quite an excellent part of this story.

Argh, BioStar ALSO has the misfortune of having atheist megalomaniacs with the fascist ambition of destroying religion. I'll take great pleasure in reading about these creeps getting punished for what they've done, just like what's going to happen to the atheists in the real world who are trying to destroy religion as well.

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From Steelrush on July 23, 2012
Chapter 6 review:

War criminals of the alien race of savages are coming the BioStar. I can predict that the wrath of Team Armageddon is coming and going to drive holes inside the hearts of Arceus and friends.

The Niterish�seki thugs also possess dark ball similar to what the Iron Masked Marauder carried in Celebi's movie, another fine testament to how dangerous they truly are.

Arceus's journey down the river seems rather...twisted. Although it feels rather comforting when the jewish family rescued him.

It feels strange, seeing the succubus once again.

Damn, these girls really got messed up by the friggin nazis. I get happy every time I see them get tortured in the stories. :D

Hahaha! Alright, Lucas! XD

Good chapter, decent length, and the parts at the end are AWESOME!
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From Steelrush on July 23, 2012
Chapter 5 review:

Team Rocket certainly did a number on Arceus. They trashed him, big time. If Team Armageddon saw that, they'd probably make allies with them.

Now the aliens appear in his nightmares...

Anyway, good chapter. Short, but I liked it.
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From Steelrush on July 23, 2012
SS troopers fried like eggs in the snow. I enjoy seeing that.
:D

The children of Arceus and Star live once again, and the Poke' toys...those are rather...strange.

Oh boy, I feel rather bad for Katriel. Hopefully N can heal her morbid emotional wounds.

Wow. Jessie, James, and Meowth are more derpy in this story than they are in the anime.

Pokemon Rangers, like the previous time I read this chapter, I'll say I didn't expect to see them again.

And who is Giovonnis?

Ugh, Arceus certainly gets his ass busted often enough.

Onto the next chapter, I will go.

Good job on this one.
:D
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From Steelrush on July 22, 2012
Solaris...every time I hear or see that name, I think of the monster that appeared in Sonic 2006. Along with the jerk who killed the blue blur. -_-

Ah, the 25th Anniversary of Zelda. I was more focused on celebrating Sonic's 20th anniversary though (oddly enough, Sonic's series has been around for as long as I have).

Heh heh, I still find it funny that Link is married to Cynthia. Lucky man. XD

Ugh, poor Arceus. I feel really bad for him that he had to suffer things of that nature.

The battle was Forrest was sure quick, I didn't expect a Charmander to take out a Steelix that easily. o____o

And the chapter ends when the flashback ends, I also did not expect that either.

Onto the next one!
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From Steelrush on July 22, 2012
Ah Lucas, he's such a ladies man-Wait...that would be an understatement right here. I wonder how many kids he'll have?

XD

And the team's Pokemon, they have rather interesting backstories.

Dying universe...I got a bad feeling about that. And the part about legendary Pokemon being restricted from having mates, that's messed up in my opinion, especially the punishment.

Heh, there are times when I really envy Lucas. XD

Alright, now I'll check out the next chapter.

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