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Reviews for The Lovers\' Law

By : unicornlord
  • From UsagiMoonDitz on January 27, 2019

    Oh god damn it why must I find amazing fanfiction only to learn it has been dead for nearly 6 years incomplete!!!! Please Please finish this!


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  • From ANON - Akuma-Heika on August 31, 2014
    Please, for the love of God, continue this!
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  • From ANON - Akuma-Heika on August 31, 2014
    since you are splitting the identities will the girl ranma be called ranko from now on? it is her official nickname
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  • From FuzzyMittens on February 02, 2014
    I really enjoyed what is here so far and I am looking forward to the next chapter. ^^
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  • From ANON - anonymous on July 01, 2013
    There's a major problem with this fanfic -- the problem is that there are "no problems". What I mean by that is, where are all the usual hijinks? Where are the interruptions? The fights? The magical items? The oneshhot characters showing up just so that they can be defeated? Where are all the boys? No Ryyoga going "die Ranma" or P-chan making Ranma end up in trouble. No Tatewaki glomping onto Ranma-chan... no Konatsu, no Tsubasa, no idiotic father duo, no Happosai ect ect ect Seriously, it needs these "problems" for it to truly be fun reading.

    Other lesser issues are such as Ranma being called Ranko (please let this fanon name just die already)... the lack of attention to descriptive details for clothes ect... and of course, no Ranma-chan+[Insert boy of choosing] sexual interaction. A Ranma story where Ranma only goes lesbian when doing he harem thing is just boring. At least let Tatewaki boink her and steal her harem from her :D
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  • From ANON - VeiledMalice on May 22, 2013
    Review for last chapter: D'aww!

    Seriously, the cuteness factor between the characters has been jacked up to 11 here, without being unrealistic or too OOC. That's really impressive. I also like the pace this is going, slowly working it's way into more overt compliments and touching instead of just breaking down and having sex everywhere. (Which is doubly odd coming from me, since that's what I usually like! XD)

    Anyway, keep up the good work! I'm really liking your take on Ukyo in particular.
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  • From ANON - Ron on May 17, 2013
    I loved it look like things are going while
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  • From ANON - anon on May 16, 2013
    The one thing I wish had been done different is to have included Kodachi.
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  • From Ryvius on May 16, 2013
    Nice update. Pretty good conversation between Ukyo and Akane.

    Hope to see more soon.


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  • From ANON - OddWallow on February 20, 2013
    Very fun story! Interesting plot twists and a lot of sexy character interactions.

    I think you've got a good writing style, and you have a pretty strong grasp of the characters, i can actually almost believe something like this happening in the original series. Eh well to a degree at least ;) i hope theres more chapters to this, its really a great read. Erotic and fun, without being over the top.

    Interested in seeing how Akane finally gets involved in this Love Fest. And please tell me there'll be a few chapters somewhere that involve Ranma having to deal with Kuno, Ryoga, and Mousse, and of course somethings got to happen with Kodachi. Theres no way any of them would sit on the sidelines and let something like this go uncontested. Dont need any huge story arc's involving them, i'd much rather read about Ranma's growing comfort and acceptance in his female form(by the way, the scene where Ranma and Cologne were talking about how people every perceive Ranma, i felt, was really well writen, and helped set the tone in the early chapters) and how the girls work through their issues and get closer. But they should definitely help provide some awkward moments :)

    Great story, please give me more
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  • From ANON - Fuzzy Mittens on February 18, 2013
    Well that was fun and it looks like Shampoo and Ukyo are growing closer together ^^ Curious to see how Akane will come to be a more solid part it all (given how theres alot of ranma AND Ukyo, ukyo and ranma, ukyo and shampoo) but little with Akane just yet...But im sure you will get to it soon enough

    Looking forward to it~
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 26, 2012
    Another great chapter! It's scaling back a bit from the rampant sexiness from last time, but that's probably good. Everyone needs a chance to rest and recharge from last chapter. XD

    But poor Akane needs to get in on the action soon. Perhaps Ukyo and Shampoo tag team shows her how sexy she really is? Or! Since Akane's getting over her handicaps/phobias, they take her swimming. Shampoo will need some water proof soap, of course...

    Anyway, keep it up! :)
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  • From ANON - VeiledMalice on October 08, 2012
    Great stuff, super hot! I love how this is slowly getting hotter as the story goes on. Ukyo becoming the dom in the relationship, too... now that's a twist I didn't see coming, but I have to admit, I do like it. Keep up the great work!
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  • From Ryvius on September 17, 2012
    Pretty good chapter.

    I like the idea of how Ranma's gonna use the cooking training to get the girls to spend more time together.

    Not much else to say at this point.

    Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Tai Khan on September 17, 2012
    An intriguing story so far, and I'm looking forward to seeing where you take it.

    However, I felt that Ranma's self-declaration of "I love being a girl, too", at the end of chapter 3, was, perhaps, a bit...vague, or unintentionally misleading, as it can be taken in many ways (especially as there has been no indication of Ranma having ever done anything similar in male form; one can 'assume' that he has, but there is nothing in canon or this story to substantiate such an assumption). Perhaps some introspection on Ranma's part as to...say...trying to compare the two different experiences, or better defining just what his statement implies (some particular aspect of being a girl (the feelings of pleasure, perhaps) or of being a girl in general), or some indication that he was trying to 'convince' himself as to the validity of the statement.

    On another aspect of the story...

    I understand the story premise, and I understand that the 'happily ever after' ending would have Ranma, Akane, Shampoo, and Ukyo all joining together under 'The Lovers' Law', but...as I'm sure you're aware, life has the tendency to rarely grant anyone a 'perfect' happily ever after.

    I was wondering how things would turn out if, say...one of the girls just couldn't accept such a union? Or, if another girl were unintentionally and unexpectedly drawn into their forming union? It's something to consider, at least.
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