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Reviews for Say you will, say you won\'t, make up your bloody m

By : Suryallee7104
  • From RJaneyP on December 11, 2012
    Love your story, all your rowdy critter people are a delight, certainly can't wait to read more. I have read a number of your stories you never disappoint. Gslinger
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  • From JubblesBubbles on November 19, 2012
    My god! You do udpate fast!!! And I thank you very much for the email, I know it can be a pain having to do it, but I asked because some ficwriters - i.e. myself - takes months between updates and AFF.Net doesn't have an alert as FF.Net. But that's not important, what relaly matters is all those amazing chapters you just wrote!

    And it's funny, it almost looks like you're taking all the plots you began with your others PSOH fics and making a grand piece! And I'm loving it. Those last twists with Tetsu x Chris, Jill x Ten, the mysterious but surely ancient blood on the Orcots... it's all really interesting, and combines with the suspense from your others fics.

    But the cliffhanger you left us in this?! Leon and D FINALLY together?! I almost squeal in delight with Leon's sentences! Mind blowing!!!

    You still makes few mistakes with the prepositions and misspelling, but it's just a little more work for you to get better. For the minor things that I can remember now - because their orgasm prety much made me forget most things now - is your missconception with "then x than": "then" is an adverb of time, in an example: "first you write your fic then I read it"; "than" is a word for comparison, as in "your english is better now than in your previous fics".

    I will try to remember to follow the fic tomorrow, but if you could, please email me again.

    Awesome chapters!

    Küsses und biss dann!
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  • From JubblesBubbles on November 18, 2012
    Ohmygods; you're amazing for wruting a post arc fic like that, where all those characters are very mature and believable and with an amazing plot like that. I adored the first chapter, with Leon's almost breakdown, the reasoning for him to go after D, the monk that brought the whole mysterious universe in another perspective... adored and loved the second, the sucessful cop with all the potencial in full capacity, his little daughter, Chris, Jill and the unfortunate deaths of pure fellow coleagues. And the lovable third chapter, Tetsu-chan returning for the humans and their souls that understand that we're not alone on this world.

    Oh, Dean and Khan! Really fantastic OCs. And Count D in his vindictive glory! Your english has little problems, but i'm adoring your writing skills.

    Please, oh please, update this, darling! It's too amazing to pass! And if I may, could you email me saying there's a new chapter online? jubblesbubbles@hotmail.com . Thanks!
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