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Reviews for The Witching Hour

By : DrunkenScotsman
  • From ANON - JRC_1700 on December 04, 2016

    I just wanted to let your know that I enjoyed your story very much. Thank you for writing it!


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  • From VenomSymbiote on October 20, 2013
    I loved this story! For once, a well written Rosario + Vampire fanfiction. I hope you continue this series with the other girls as well (particularity Kurumu). Anyway, good job! I can't wait to read your next fic.
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  • From Aysha on October 18, 2013
    Chapter 5 was incredible! I do hope he gets all the girls, including inner Moka after she teaches him his place. You said you already finished writing this story so I guess there is no point in making suggestions. I will say that it bugs me that in most of the harem genre of anime that the guy doesn't end up with all the girls. I hope there is a twist with inner Moka being bi and outward being straight.

    Your writhing is well refined but I did notice on error in grammar when you wrote that Tsukune and Yukari (lay) in bed. (lay) should be (lie) Objects lay, living beings lie. It is a common mistake most people make.
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  • From Aysha on October 18, 2013
    Wow chapter 4 was really intense.
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  • From NightEye on October 05, 2013
    Well, Yukari certainly made a lot of good points about the other girls. And certainly a fair number for herself. I'm curious though. Aren't her parents dead? I only read the manga, so maybe the anime is different, I dunno. Also, if Yukari is your least favorite character, why'd you accept the challenge? Not that I'm complaining, I'm very much enjoying the story so far.
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  • From Aysha on September 28, 2013
    that was very entertaining!
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  • From Aysha on September 24, 2013
    Read both chapters, and so far so good. The characters seem true to cannon and are very amusing. I sincerely look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From NightEye on September 22, 2013
    Personal thing, I REALLY hope Yukari shaves. I really don't like chicks with hair down there, though I'd be fine if she trimmed it down to a small patch.
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