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Reviews for Tug-of-War

By : thewriterwhocameinfromthecold
  • From RAW19 on March 12, 2019

    Ugh, this stopping point is too cruel! Right when Motoko was finally gonna join the club.

    Regardless, most excellent.


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  • From Bismarck-Alexander on March 31, 2017

    Come on let's get an update to this please!


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  • From joeparas1988 on July 23, 2016

    :(

    Miss this story 

    While never a huge fan of the angst, it probably has some of the most unique, kinkiest smut themes in fanfiction.


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  • From ANON - Anon on January 08, 2016
    I like the new direction and look forward to every chapter. The possession thing felt like it came out of nowhere but this is way better. Thanks a lot!
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  • From ANON - TheSinful on January 08, 2016
    Wow. Way to make Motoko absolutely adorable. I'm not even being sarcastic. Just wanna squeeze her tight and never let go. Also kudos on having a Naru I find tolerable (even likable in this case).
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  • From joeparas1988 on January 07, 2016
    Would be a hilarious twist if, in ditching the old Motoko arc, you took the opposite tone by making everything she said in this chapter be utter BS to get in Keitaro's pants, lol.
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  • From joeparas1988 on January 05, 2016
    Much better, I think. And the thing with Kentaro being brought up could be really hot, as long as he's not a prick. It's all well and good to say Naru is promiscuous, but it all seems so 'past tense' until she starts fucking other guys too.

    When that time comes though, making it as minimally angsty as possible is probably key. Maybe Motoko will help in that regard. What's good for the goose and all that, and I'd like to think that, while not liking it all that much, Keitaro is smart enough to catch on quick. Angst doesn't really suit this fic, I feel.
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  • From ANON - Seraph on January 03, 2016
    While it sucks we won't see demon Motoko be a thing, make me wonder what will happen next. Hope the next chapter comes easily.
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  • From ANON - AT90 on January 02, 2016
    It's better than before, Naru isn't so....contradictory in what she is saying in regards to their 'relationship'. She still doesn't make much sense to me on the whole, it's hard to really understand the dynamic
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 31, 2015
    Haitani’s gaze darted between Naru and his own hand. Mirroring what he had seen, he smacked Kitsune. The slap echoed in the small room. Kitsune squealed.
    “There you go.” Naru turned to Keitaro.
    Why are you calling Keitaro "Haitani"?
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  • From ANON - Dood on December 30, 2015
    Thumbs up. I always like a new chapter. Hope a new one comes soon.
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  • From ANON - AT90 on December 29, 2015
    Really like chapter 30 but I have to admit, I do agree with what 'Jason' said months ago about the story. Naru has gone from treating this like 'free sex'/winning a competition to getting jealous and thinking things were maybe different with him...to now saying she is going to still be having sex with other guys. It doesn't really match the growth we've seen from her as a character to me.

    It felt like you were leading Naru and Keitaro together slowly, and yet now it just feels like both girls treat him really poorly.

    Neither of them are being fair to him at all.
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  • From joeparas1988 on December 29, 2015
    Oh god, you're such a tease. Been waiting for that orgy scene for what seems like forever, but didn't get the swinging I wanted. I suppose Keitaro isn't ready for that, but jesus. TEASE! Really hot scene though. As an aside, I'm finding it hard to care as much about the Motoko arc. Maybe because the fic didn't start out that way, or maybe it's because her character is just a wet blanket over the Keitaro/Naru arc, I dunno.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 07, 2015
    As far as the girls were concerned, having a male manager in the apartment wasn't a violation. On the contrary, it was an opportunity...Harem.

    I feel that this is pretty misleading.
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  • From Lyther on August 05, 2015
    Hey I wasn't sure if this story was done or not but hey it keeps getting better, keep the good work going.
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