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Reviews for Going for a Swim

By : kanzen
  • From li_ming on July 26, 2015
    This has no detail with how they orgasm. Literally, you can't come in one sentence without describing how it happened. It needs more build up and more detail.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 25, 2013
    Please remove this from the Yuri section and put it into a more appropriate section. This story contains explicit heterosexual content, and thus is not fit for readers of the Female/Female section. If you do not comply in a timely manner, this story will be reported.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 16, 2013
    Yay, Luna finally joins! Too bad it has Artemis doing stuff right next to her and also anal sex, but I can always edit that stuff out when I save it to a word file. Looking forward to the next part!
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  • From ANON - Miss on December 16, 2013
    Anal sex and a shitload of double dildos...well, you'd NEVER guess the writer is a male, huh?
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  • From ANON - Bear on December 10, 2013
    good chapter and im super pumped for to have black lady seduce usagi, actually i wasr reading the reviews and about how u frst thought it was for rini to seduce usagi i thought about it that sounds even better, so could it be black lady but not aged up so its just rini's usual age as black lady, bascally a lolita black lady, if u do this i will love u even more forever and my sexy vampire minions will make cookies for u
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 08, 2013
    Fun chapter, and I can't wait for to see things once Luna's involved! just as a thought, and this is totally okay not to do because I don't want to push my luck, but it sounds like you're doing the other guy's idea of Black Lady taking Usagi as her sex slave, which is very hot and I def. approve, but I was thinking maybe it could be that Luna frees her from it with the power (and sex!) of real love? But whatever you want to do with it is fine.
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  • From ANON - Bear on December 02, 2013
    pls have rini be black lady and hypnotize/corrupt serena into her sex slave do it and i will love u forever and so will my sexy vampire minions
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 01, 2013
    Sorry I misunderstood your response, that sounds great (at least the Luna part I don't care about Artemis lol), if Luna is going to be romantically paired with Setsuna then it's not necessary for her to be with Serena as well since I just kind of want to see Luna be happy with a woman (although the more Luna x Girl stuff, the better, so go ahead if you want to!). I hope she will also be present for any orgies with the girls but that's your call of course, anyway I will look forward to see ing more, thanks for taking my suggestion!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 01, 2013
    I read your response about the Luna idea of mine, it's pretty disappointing, the whole point was that on the rare occasions Luna gets to have any fun she always has to settle for hetero sex with Artemis, now it sounds like you're saying that even in this *lesbian* story that's still what she gets stuck with.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 01, 2013
    I have a suggestion for you, could you please have some action with human-form Luna, at a bare minimum her and Usagi (Serena) making sweet love but it would be great if Luna could also be with some of the others for a bit too, and take part in of the orgy you're working towards. Poor Luna never gets any fun and on the rare occasions she does it always seems to be with Artemis, poor girl needs some lesbian loving!
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  • From ANON - The Todd on November 29, 2013
    Kind Of Sexy But I Think You Forgot Her Name Is Haruka Not Hakura Five!
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  • From ANON - Sus on November 28, 2013
    Pretend that Rini and Hotaru are 18 in the future? Not a chance, they're sexy enough right now, thank you very much. Anyway...this was pretty sexy and fun for the first while, but after the sex is done and the attack comes, things seem disoriented and weird.
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