Reviews for PrideBy : Vyper |
This chapter gets a big ass "F ---" for its disturbing content. I bet your a female author because only this type of rubbish can only be made by a women ( I really hope so cause no gay person would write such a scenario) with a twisted fantasy I mean wtf what the heck is with you chicks with rape scenes in m/m fiction? Its not cool nor hot! Just as its disturbing and horrible for rape to occur in a heterosexual party its just as awful for it to happen in a homosexual group so quit glorifying that shit. I'm not even gonna go into full detail on what I disliked about Natsu and Gray's relationship I'll just say its a disturbing & offensive one built on noncon rape and some odd type of forced Stockholm syndrome through magic....? What's most funny and weird is how you tried to sprinkle in the "mates trope" into the story as a lame attempt to handwave Natsu's horrible actions by making it appear romantic, typical tactic for m/m female writers but what I find worse of all is how Gajeel was villainized for calling out Natsu on suspicions that he's correct about....the hell type of logic is that!? I wouldn't have no complaints if only you made Gray a consenting party.
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