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Reviews for Pokemon: Lewd Ruby

By : C0yot372I
  • From Dansama92 on May 27, 2016
    This story is amazing. I know it's been a while but I hope to see another chapter soon
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  • From JChittester on May 15, 2016
    I am really liking this story. When will you post the next chapter?
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  • From ANON - xigva on March 26, 2016
    I'm sad to see that this story seems to have stalled out here at Chapter 7. It was REALLY enjoyable so far, much more well done than many of the other "erotic alternate playthrough" sort of stories that I've read because of how you are building the relationship(s) between Merry and her Pokemon.
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  • From JChittester on December 14, 2015
    I am liking this story a lot. I can't wait to see what happens next. A funny thing is that I also caught in the beginning of the game a poochyena with the move Thunder Fang. I am curious on how often that happens?
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  • From ANON - ethan on September 05, 2015
    WOW ... That was an amazing story. I cannot wait for the next part
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  • From ANON - Meeks on May 26, 2015
    I'm normally too lazyto review. And I hope auto correct is working on my side. This story is full of win, I really really like it and hope you have the time to updarw soonU
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 21, 2015
    i think this story is coming along nicely, but it's not just females that have a submissive nature. It's something all genders have. I would correct Jinx's statement to read "[Lassie, Meredith has a submissive side like anyone else"
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  • From NoOrdinaryMagic on April 18, 2015
    Awesome story! I can't wait to see where you go with this storyline!
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  • From ANON - KC on March 17, 2015
    Loved it! I like your combo of plot and smut! About the xp share... Maybe have it work like a mechanic used by trainers; they have their pokemon out of their pokeballs to watch a team member fight an opponent and by watching they learn ( =xp)?
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  • From ANON - kojoe92 on March 15, 2015
    Look man. Gotta say I'm loving this story.but i have no idea on how the exp share would work. Waiting not so patiently for the next update
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  • From ANON - guisniperman on March 13, 2015
    Well, mabe a point of view camera that allow other pokemon to live the battle like the pokemon fighting did and it makes them understand weaknesses, what to do in wich situation, etc. Also, Zinnia is a dirty little voyeur.
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  • From ANON - Janissa on March 04, 2015
    Very fun story to read. Love the romance between Merry and Jinx and really like how you have the other Pokemon learning about love / sex. Should be really interesting to see how they all act as they mature and after Merry has her kits.

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  • From Ryvius on February 27, 2015
    Good chapter. Made some good progress with the characters and officially got Merry started on her Pokemon journey!

    I really like the scene where Merry's Mom gave Jinx to her, that was a nice scene.

    Very nice detail with the part where Merry had to sign the legal papers, never actually seen that in a pokemon fic before. Makes a lot of sense actually, kinda surprised I've never thought of that till now, lol.

    Love the bit where Merry hit Brendon in the head with the Pokeball, particularly the part where he remarked that that had been the third time that month that had happened. I used to think that he just had white hair.

    Really like how you show what the Pokemon are saying. I think it really helps to get a feel for their personalities and natures. It's also fun to see what their actually saying to each other.

    Okay, I got an OC for you. I came up with him for a Pokemon story idea of my own but haven't gotten around to yet.

    Name:Jack Condit
    Age:17-18

    Appearance:A lean and fit young man with dark hair of slightly above-average height with a scared, ruined left eye. Usual outfit consists of a dark green hoodie, an undershirt, and black traveling pants & sneakers.

    Description:A skilled martial artist and Pokemon Trainer traveling on his journey. Something of a loner, Condit tends to keep to himself on his travels and is rarely seen smiling, but contrary to his somewhat intimidating appearance and bearing, is actually a kind and friendly individual who likes to help people where he can. Enjoys competition, whether it be in combat or in Pokemon battles. Possesses killer like instinct in battle, however, he has a bad tendency to second guess and doubt himself due to a incident from his past.

    When he was younger, just before he was about to start his Pokemon journey, he heard news that a violent Scyther had been sighted near his hometown, far from it's normal habitats. Impatient, full of confidence, and desperate to prove himself, Condit took one of his parents Pokemon before leaving his town in search of the Mantis Pokemon, intending to capture it. Shockingly, he succeeded, but at the cost of his left eye , several deep cuts, and the near death of his family's Pokemon.

    The incident left his relationship with his friends and family, particularly his father, deeply shaken, and scared Condit in more ways than one. However, he desperately held onto the Pokeball that held his starter, the Scyther he'd lost an eye to obtain, (which his parents and officials were intent on taking from him for obvious safety reasons) and after a lengthy healing process, started on his Pokemon journy, having matured greatly from the incident.

    Team Roster: (Eventual)
    Reaper - Scyther Male, Nature - Serious

    Dare - Zubat Male, Nature - Relaxed

    Ahri - Vulpix Female, Nature - Eager

    Armor - Sandshrew Male, Nature - Calm

    Safiya - Ralts Female, Nature - Gentle

    Courage - Cubone Male , Nature - Lonely

    Gemlight - Staryu Gendeless, Nature - Hasty

    So that's my OC. Do what you will with him. Sorry if I went overboard with the details, let me know if I did. I have a few other OC's I can suggest, with varying levels of detail and back story, if you want them.

    Keep up the good work!
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  • From The-OC-Slutifyer on February 27, 2015
    ( this is a review for chapter 4 )

    Something tells me that Jerry's mother knows about Jinx's relationship with Merry. But that aside I'm glad Jinx isn't left behind.

    Ironically I myself also caught a poochyena that knew Thunder fang as well :-) . Lastly if you like me to send you an OC, find me on FF.net as "the OC maker".
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  • From Ryvius on February 24, 2015
    Interesting start. I like what you've done with the characters so far, hope to see a bit more of Brendon later on and am curious to see your take on the friend/rival character.

    The action between Merry and Jinx has been pretty entertaining so far (like the knotting detail and how possessive Jinx is of Merry) and I must admit I was surprised to see that Merry's already pregnant. But I like this, I haven't seen too many pokemon fics where inter-species breeding was possible, and it definitely makes things interesting.

    Keep up the good work! Looking forward to more!
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