Reviews for Getting to know the new girlBy : Fanfictionfan360 |
Was that new girl suppose to be someone or just a plain OC? I googled her name and got Tomoko Kuroki from Wata Mote. Anyways I'll give you props for making this a nice long read but the focus on this OC kinda took away some of the enjoyment for me. OC are in my opinions made more for the Multi-chapter adventure type fics not really for Lemony fics.
I'd hug Tomoki, but the gang has that well in hand.
... counting the Mirror, that's five girls now? Sakura should look into using the cards to help Syaoran keep up. Maybe The Create could give him temporary tentacles? ;D
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