Reviews for It only stings for a momentBy : Fanfictionfan360 |
This was an excellent fic!
Oddly enough, I did expect that Mina's tongue would tingle during a kiss lol. I also did enjoy the intimacy and chemistry (pardon the pun) of the two.
The only small detractor to me was the destruction of the couch, which reminded me of that Trope (Destructo Nookie), but I'll give it a pass as they're heroes after all!
Overall, enjoyed it!
Ooh, I really enjoyed this story. You write those two so we'll!
That was beautiful. You should write more
Er MAH GERD this is so great!!! I love thisand I love them! Please, please, PLEASE write an actual fan fic for them with this same relationship, but ya know, lengthier. Like friends, then friends who fuck, then friends who chatch feels. That kinda thing. Ugh. I need more of them in any form. I don't think I shipped them so heavily, but that ship has sailed and I'm a faithful crew member.
Loved this story!!
hey I love your story
cab I be in it
and I think your quirk is soo cool ,
I wish I had one
This went about exactly how I thought it would. Right down to the breaking furniture XD
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