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Reviews for A Single Spark

By : SailorPanda
  • From ANON - angelofchaos on November 11, 2006
    omg!!!!!!!!
    that's great!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    hahahaha
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  • From Jimaine on November 04, 2005
    AHHH I LOVE!!! hehe i took notes...ok let me see...WHen Tohru says you know more about boys and like waits before explaining...hehe it's great lol!! Umm when Hana calls him and exelint specimen and he's like Eh? I almost died laughing hehe. What would you do if someone actully said that to you lol. Ohh and reading too many of Shigure;s novils hehe perfactly placed...The other Phenomina stuff, hehe no shit! He should be like "It's ok my son's really a cat." LOL, no no he really shoulden't but it would be funny as hell! But that she does actully kinda friten him, jut not that part of her, that's great!!! His iner gallantness is awsome btw...ummm hold on there's more i'm having problems reading my hand writting lol. Yeah question, was she like manipulating him with waves or somithing cuzz ohh wow I wish i could do that with a man i'm into, poor Kyo. The love bites yeah, can't wait till she explaines those away teh next day. Arisa "Hey hana what happend to you're neck." Hana "I had sex with Kyo's dad." Kyo "WHAT!!!" Umm i got something here about letting somthing slip away and then EVIL HANA...maybe that's about the glove lol...umm next...Ohh yeah you set this story up perfectly! It's like all hot so there arn't any classes so Shishou is out, then shoping for Megumi and Torhu having to work and Shishou being his gallent self and then the iceceram. It all works!!! Like no OOCness AWSOME! Ohh yeah and it was really funny when he was like they were all alone exept for all the people. very cleaver! But yeah about half way thorugh i'm thinking Hana must have planed this! So yeah about the time her panties came off all i could think about was Kyo is going to have a shit fit lol. And then when Kazama is all like and Inocent to boot. Heheh tooboot that's great!!! I thouth i was the only person that did stuff like that! Ohh ohh and when he's all like well that was unexpected. No shit dumbass! But it was the perfect thing to saw right then i though i laughed so hard i almost fell out of my chair. I probably would have exept my desk is wedged between my bed and the wall and ya gotta be a goddamn contosionist to get in and out of here, but you didn't need to know that lol. ANyways then when hana's all talking about studing intersting things and stuff taht was perfect. All in all really awsome. But an epiloge for the next day at school with Kyo's mental break down would be awsome, but don't worrie about it. The sotrys perfect. And it must be hard to write a lemon for Hana, Shishou too. There's alot of people in furuba like that lol. For me trying to wright my Kyo Torhu Leman in "The Monsters Dream and The God's Curse" yeah that was almost imposible. Seriosly considered scraping the whole story right there lol. But no you did really good job hehe! Right onya!!!
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  • From ANON - LinBean on April 17, 2005
    Haha! Awesome! Kazuma is such a good guy...it's hard to make him out to be the wild animal that Shigure or Kyou might be. This was a great fic...although my favorite is the Christmas Gureru. Great job!
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  • From ANON - ... on February 14, 2005
    Very good writing. However, there are quite a lot of run-on sentences. Usually the ones i found could be broken up into 3 sentences or more. It was a little weird for me to think of Hana as Saki also, but that wasnt big. I liked the story and plot. Fan fics with Kazuma Sohma arent common. Just try and work on the run-ons.
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  • From ANON - Ironic Vow on February 02, 2005
    Great job! Continue by all means.
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  • From ANON - anon on January 01, 2005
    This was a great fic! write more Fruits Basket fics--especially this pairing!
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  • From ANON - CraZwe on July 17, 2003
    Oh god...

    FINALLY! A KazumaxHana

    I LOVE YOU! I BOW DOWN TO YOUR GREATNESS MORE HANAJIMA STORIES PLEASE!
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  • From ANON - gigi on July 10, 2003
    YES! hana-chan is just so kickass in your fics. you write her really well with her having hte upper hand somehow. i love it and please write more hana-chan lemons!
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