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Reviews for Trust

By : pinkwhirlwind
  • From zetsuai2005 on January 16, 2007
    This whole story was very poetic, and yet bared raw emotions and healing, redeeming love. I love this pairing, but there is just so much bullshit out there about their supposed love/hate relationship. If Shuichi finds something to love in Eiri, then Eiri is lovable, not refuse, not wasted space, end of discussion. Being raped is an act of violence from which many never recover. But few have the love of a Shuichi in their life to start the healing and see it through. Well written, sensitive piece. I applaud your courage to break the cycle of the typical Shuichi/Eiri story, where self destructive behaviour breeds like flies and taints the relationship as well as the characters. Your writing is awesome but your insight is even better. Well done!
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  • From ANON - Dawn (Ashe Crow) on December 03, 2006
    First, I just wanted to say, that I love this story. I really like your characterization, it is just so sweet.

    I also have two questions. One, would you be willing to let me archive this story on my website? It's small, and as of yet not any stories actually up yet (I'm in the middle of site construction, but I'm hoping over the holidays to finish it). My second question is kind of along different lines. I was wondering if you would be willing to speak with me about your experience as a fanfiction writer (specifically Gravitation fic). I'm doing my thesis on characters and narrative in fanfiction, and would love to have your input. In fact, I should let you know that part of my website is about my research and goals, as well as being an archive for fanworks :) Whether or not you are interested, however, I would still love to archive your work.

    -Dawn
    a.k.a. Ashe Crow
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  • From ANON - Wolf on December 26, 2005
    Awsome writing. This fic turned out really well, i hope there is a lot more fics in the making.
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  • From ANON - Reikachan on November 23, 2005
    this story is awesome. update it more pls. the plot and the characterization are also great. wow

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  • From ANON - Kathrine on March 06, 2005
    This is by far the best written, most moving and inspired fanfiction I have ever read. Good work.
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  • From ANON - Hack on August 27, 2004
    Please continue!!!!! Your story is the best I've read!!!!!!!!!!! Please have them married soon...if you want.
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  • From ANON - Kloudy Reignfall on July 23, 2004
    Yay, I found it! Strange last chapter, but it completes the story perfectly!
    Ahh, what a very odd sign of trust, changing positions.
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  • From PatoSan on April 20, 2004
    That was a really nicelt written lemon at the end. Very realistic, extremely in fact. I'm really glad I got to read a well written, hot and still 'not flowery' lemon. The fact that Eiri didn't even get hard was a bonus, and the speed at whcih Shuichi came and the comment about him being a teenager: all very good. Lovely ideas in that last chapter, honestly. Very nice altogether. Definately five stars.
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  • From PatoSan on April 20, 2004
    Ok, I thought Ihad read all the good fics on this site, how did I miss this?!? I was going to read the whole thing and then review (something helf intelligent hopefully), but I have to make a pause at the end of chapter two and do a huge fangirl squeal (as embarrasing as this may be for a grown up like me...) Nyiiiiiiiiiaaa! You had one of hte nicest Tohma/Eiri scenes I've seen. With the two understanding and still parting ways; so emotional though. I LOVED it. *calms down* Ok, I shall keep reading and review later... Tohma kun is my baby; I'm glad to see another writer who likes him.

    P.S. Read Inertia!!!!! (by littlenin)
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  • From on March 03, 2004
    Ah! Kawii! I love it! I'm such a big fan of Gravitation and you portray Eiri and Shuichi so perfectly! Keep it up, ne?
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  • From ANON - Kairi on January 03, 2004
    Please hurry and write more love the story
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  • From ANON - Kari on December 27, 2003
    I loved that you havewritwrite more please I liked it so much please o please write more
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  • From ANON - sailoronymoon on September 05, 2003
    OMG! That was so adorable! Yuki and Shuuichi all the way! I absolutely loved it! Thanks for such a great story!
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  • From ANON - Ryouko Haka on August 31, 2003
    This was a kick ass fic!!!! The story line was tremendous, this has been the best posted so far. You're writing is excellent, and you're extremely decriptive and go into the story with a depth that most writers don't have. You really get a good look at what Eiri-san's thoughts and feelings. I really appreciate your work. If there is more to this story please write soon! It seemed as if there might be the way you finished it. If not make a SEQUEL!!!! Please keep writing! ^_^

    Arigatou

    Ja ne,

    Ryouko Haka (Dragon/Tiger Girl)

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