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Reviews for To End a Life

By : miya
  • From Bloodysyren on April 18, 2008
    Yay!! Hot Sex!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 02, 2006
    Good, but it's one giant paragraph.
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  • From ANON - Samuria on March 11, 2005
    This was an absolutely awsome fic. The way you paired them was not oc at all which is hard with Hakkai and sonzo plus that was some of the best lemon that i have ever read. At first the lack of paragraphs buged me mut by the end it kind of made the fic more enjoyable, giving the reader a fealing of anxiousness. over all two thumbs up!
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  • From ANON - Sariyuki on September 14, 2004
    Wow. Simply wow. Very good. I enjoyed it muchly. And the quality? Superb ^_^ Only maybe you need to fix the formatpofryour story. It's hard to read as it is now. Cheers~
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  • From ANON - angelicyokai on March 21, 2004
    very nice story, but the layout makes it difficult to read, you may want to concider indenting paragraphs and such
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  • From ANON - The Falcon on February 17, 2004
    Okay, I'm not sure if you're aware, but there is NO formatting in your story. It's all one big block of words. I'm not going to try and wade through it, but since I do WANT to read it, I'll check back periodically to see if it's gotten any better. Here's hoping you find the problem, so I can read what I'm sure is a wonderful story.
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  • From ViragoLuna on December 24, 2003
    That was completely beautiful. That's all that I can say about it, but yet it doesn't quite say what the story is. It's just simply amazing!
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  • From ANON - Simply_Kim on November 07, 2003
    WAH! That was so nice! ^___^ Great job with the plot, it's very touching... really! ^___^
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  • From ANON - SchizoIori on October 16, 2003
    This was beautifully written. I was awed at how well you portrayed the characters. I am quite pleased that I was able to read something as wonderfully done as this. The emotions expressed by the characters was well voiced, and every choice of words was tactful as well. Props on such an excellent lemon. I hope to see more of this great writing.
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  • From ANON - Jan on September 26, 2003
    This was a great PWP...Both were so in character! You did a great job of capturing Sanzo's sullenness/depression.... Hakkai was great as well....Please write more featureing these two... What fun!
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  • From ANON - Anya on September 08, 2003
    Helloooooooo!!! Ya know that your fics is great, so what else can I say??? Still can you make a story about Goku x Sanzo, Pleaseeeeeeee... Ya know, puppy eyes. 8D
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 08, 2003
    Great SanzoxHakkai lemon. Hk is my favorite and you caught his and Sanzo's personalities just right. I've never felt the chemistry between Sanzo and Gojyo anyway. I think GojyoxHakkai or SanzoxHakkai is much better. Maybe someone someday will do a threesome.
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