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Reviews for Lie To Me

By : RDimeria
  • From ANON - Rae on August 10, 2004
    ACK!!! NEED MORE NOW >_
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  • From ANON - kitsuneoni on October 30, 2003
    nice fic...
    the pace is a bit too fast though. i think you could draw out the scenes and add more description and create a much more effective and striking effect. at the moment everythings a bit rushed and distant...
    it'd be cool to have some more emotions in the story too. you describe very horrific scenes but we dont get the characters emotions behind em and so they dont hit the reader half as much as they could.
    i like the idea, its very... sad and painful... and they all seem so mean...
    do continue, and please email when you update if that doesnt bother you too much :)
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  • From ANON - Ayami on October 11, 2003
    WEEEEE!!! This just keep getting better and better!!! LOL
    I was reading the new chapter, and I was like thinking about so many thing that I want to say to you along the way...then I read the last part, the part when Farfello pouring orange juice into his cereal.
    Magami! I was laughing so hard I forget everything I wanted to say about the other parts of the story, I didn't see that coming at all, the humor catch me by such a big suprise! You just keep getting better!
    I love your style, very enjoyable, you're fanfastic!
    I will talk more but I'm laughing too hard and this is getting long. Please update soon. I can't wait to see Omi!
    ^^

    Aya-chan

    another +++++ vote.
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  • From Ayami on October 04, 2003
    Wow, you update another great chapter! this is so wonderful. It's nice to see the work of a cool writer like you. I love the idea of Farfello falling in love (or sex...whatever more accurate). It is, like you day, fun. ^__^ You have such an amazing brain! I can't wait to see how the story develop! I love this sotry so much!

    Keep up the great work, your writing is definately a page turner. I can't wait to see the next chapter up.

    Aya-chan

    I gave it another +++++ rating.
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  • From Ayami on September 16, 2003
    Yeah!!!! You updated!!!
    NOOOO!!!!!!! Not my dear Omi...
    ;_______________;___;
    Omi!!! Nagi!!!!!
    I love your update! I gave it another +++++ rating.
    You're the best! Please, write more now!!!
    I can't wait to see what happened.
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  • From ANON - Ayami on September 14, 2003
    yeah! An Omi/Nagi story! I love this pairing ^__^
    This is a very dark and distrubing beginning, poor Nagi. ;_____;
    I love this a lot, please continue soon. I want to see what happen soon.

    Ayami

    my rating +++++
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