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Reviews for Wandering

By : Chiruken
  • From ANON - Yami Kitsune on October 07, 2003
    Poor Kenshin. He's not having much luck with his male lovers recently, is he.

    Oh well, great chapter, (despite what you think)

    Thanks for making Shishio better then SOMEONE. Baka Daishi!

    Don't worry, if I have any BRILLIANT (yes I'm being sarcastic) suggestions you'll know.

    Maybe it's time Kenshin found Aoshi again.

    If this chapter didn't have forshadowing in it I'll eat my keyboard.

    I know you have a plot hiding somewhere.

    More chapters PLEASE!



    Ja!
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  • From ANON - Pia Bartolini *still battling with the nails....and losing* on October 06, 2003
    Hm, not a bad chapterm, although weaker than any of the previous ones. It seemed just reallu unnecessary, you know? Like you went from an objective set of vignettes to more of a PWP-et's-see-how-many-individuals-Kenshin-can-guilt-screw mess. A wonderful fic, of course, so I hold it to I higher standard. This wasn't bad, per se, but definitely not your strongest chapter. I think the plot needs to be refocused a little so the earlier efforts aren'tlost in minutia. Capice?

    Thanks for the update babe!
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  • From ANON - writegirl on October 06, 2003
    Hi Again!!!

    Please, keep sending more this way!!!!l yol you continue through the series, or stop just short of when he meets Kaoru??? (I'd like to see his reaction to meeting Saito again, but thats just me :) anyway, whatever you want to give is more than welcome and greatly appreciated!!! [writegirl bows down in worship]
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  • From ANON - Pia Bartolini on October 03, 2003
    That wasn't awkward at all. I think, in fact, that was one of your better vignettes.....the quality of it seemed a little more normal than the others. Ah, normal in the sense that the emotional response wasn't as exceptional. We weren't dealing with an outlierish individual, or a stoic warrior.....so it was easier to relate, as a reader, and yet still maintained that same level of intrigue. Very nicely done, can't WAIT for more!
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  • From ANON - Yami Kitsune on October 03, 2003
    Yay! More chapters of sexy Kenshin.
    I should have known Shishio wouldn't be any good. Oh well.
    I liked Kenshin with a woman, wasn't exspecting it.
    Are you planning on bringing Saito back?
    Loved the last chapter.
    Heck, I love the whole fic, prequal included.
    I hope you have more planned.
    Please hurry with more chapters.

    Ja!
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  • From ANON - Jenna Muff on October 01, 2003
    Yah! I missed the first few chapters of this! So glad I dropped by when I did! :D

    Wonderful, wonderful, chock-full of lemons as usual. (whines) I want a Kenshin-whore of my very own!!!!

    And a SHISHIO lemon to boot! Good grief, where did you get tTWISTWISTED idea from??? It was fantastic, in a really horrible, degrading sort of way!

    If it weren't impossible, I'd wonder if Kenshin's asking for a gang-rape here... (shivers at the thought)

    :D :D :D

    @Jen@
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  • From ANON - lere on October 01, 2003
    Man, I now I know the sickness did kill Kenshin: AIDS!!!! He fucked every man in Japan!!!!

    Do you think you'll make a sequel to this story too? About Tokio??? I hope you remember what Kenshin said before Tomoe (Compliance). He wanted a woman's love and a family. To know real love and the fellings just a woman can brigs to one man. I hope the relationship with Kaoru will be a part of the story if that come. Until now your stories are about Kenshin's misterious past at the revolution and wandering years. But after that there is the anime/manga saga and we know he founds a deep love with Kaoru. I believe she is his rendemption and despiste the OVA (tears), she is the cure for his sorrow and soul's darkness. Don't forget this if you are thinking about a sequel.

    Hugs from Brazil.

    PS: My english is terrible because my lenguage is portugese.
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  • From ANON - koe760 on October 01, 2003
    Woah....chapter 3 was...interesting, if a bit weird. Hmmm...I don't think that I really like the whole idea of Shishio and Kenshin together...it creates nasty thoughts and es ies in my mind that I would rather not see. But I still think that you did a really good job on the chapter! And I really can't wait to find out what happens next! In this chapter you mentioned the Sekihoutai, so does this mean that maybe our little Kenshin will be meeting a certain Captain Sagara? Wouldn't that be interesting to read about! I also liked your Mary Swanson character! And maybe Kenshin might actually be able to "meet" her father? ...Uh...or maybe not...I have a very sick mind when it comes to Kenshin and random men...not that I consider that a bad thing...

    Oh, please update soon like you have been doing so far! I love how you are able to update so fast! You must be working your butt off to finish typing these chapters so darn fast! I really appreciate it! I just hope that this set of fics is never finished and goes on and on and on forever and ever until there are over a million different chapters, all of them even better than the one before it...

    Anyways, update update update! Cause I love it I love it I love it!
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  • From ANON - Yami Kitsune on September 30, 2003
    Yay! A continuation of my favorite fic ever by possibly the best author who's fic's I've ever read! Your stories get better and better. And considering they started out great...

    Can Kenshin meet up with Shishio? I just thought...well...nevermind.

    Ja!
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  • From ANON - writegirl on September 29, 2003
    HI! I just got finished reading compliance and wandering, and I love them!!!! Will there be more? Please? pretty please with naked kenshin on top???????
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  • From ANON - koe760 on September 28, 2003
    oh...another wonderful chapter...I just love it how you update so often. I can not wait until you post up the next chapter! I hope that you continue to update as fast as you have been doing so far. I just love this all!
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  • From ANON - koe760 on September 28, 2003
    Oh goody! You made a sequel! I am so happy! I really really really like this story! Please post up a lot more chapters as soon as you can!
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  • From ANON - the communist dust bunny on September 27, 2003
    yay! a sequel ^_^
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