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Reviews for The French Parasol

By : Draqonelle
  • From ANON - Marilyn on November 13, 2005
    omg! the characters are so out of character! i dont know what omc means, so if you did warn me beforehand, i'm sorry about this outburst. but i usually don't like it when characters are THIS out of character, i dont mind a little, but don't you think Kenshin is being a little too...feminine? not that he wasn't from the beginning but this a bit extream, for example; one the first few chapters Kenshin puts a hand over his chest or heart or w/e, i dont know if im right about this one, but i've never seen a guy do that. another example is when Kenshin is talking to Soujirou, he puts his hand on Souji's arm?! thats, i think, is a bit extreme. there might have been more but i didnt read any farther than that part so...if i offended you, i'm very sorry.
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  • From ANON - Kogas Hentai Luver on November 02, 2005
    Nice story. I enjoyed reading it way back when you originally posted it and enjoyed it again. I was disappointed that you haven't updated it. Oh, just to give you a heads up. Your Disclaimer has to be in the FIRST chapter. Creating a second chapter for the disclaimer alone will not fly with the owners. You need to move your disclaimer to the first chapter and delete that second chapter, K ^_^ This is just friendly advise. I do hope you update sometime.
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  • From SoulHunter on November 17, 2003
    Wow! I really enjoyed this so far. You've put great thought and work into this and I applaud you. The Biifu party was hilarious, and to think, we now know that the Japanese diet is one of the healtt ont on the planet and beef, milk, and butter aertaertainly not the healthiest things for you. Very well done and I love the way you've portrayed all the characters. But I noticed one error. If it's Kaoru's twentieth birthday, then he's known her three years, not almost ten. That would make Yahiko somewhere around fourteen I believe and Kenshin thirty-one. Ohter than that, keep it coming and keee ane angsty humor served hot!
    Huggles
    Soul~chan
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