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Reviews for Innocent Seduction

By : froop
  • From ANON - sdaf on January 12, 2007
    Another great chapter!
    Perhaps next time we can see some of that Shinji/Misato or Shinji/Ritsuko. Or perhaps both?
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 07, 2007
    To the reviewer before me: Who gives a fuck about Touji?

    To the creator: This fic is probably the best one recently. I hope you continue with it. ShinjixEveryFemaleCharacter FTW!!!
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  • From ANON - 94saturn on December 21, 2006
    Chapter two.

    LOL This is great stuff! I really liked the Misato flashback. My only disappointment is you didn’t include a Shinji, Hikari and Asuka threesome. But I haven’t read chapter three yet so maybe I / they might get lucky.

    Chapter three didn’t appeal to me as much as the first two. Some how having Shinji of all people screw another mans bride seemed wrong even to this perverted son-of-a bitch; but the sex was hot and satisfying!

    I think this story deserves two more chapters if you’re willing to write them. May I suggest in chapter four Hikari and Asuka perform for Shinji then let him join the fun. Then in chapter five have Hikari and Asuka perform for Shinji and Toji followed by Asuka teaching Toji how to perform his duty as a husband while Hikari gets another dose of Shinji.


    DC (94saturn)

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  • From ANON - 94saturn on December 20, 2006
    You did a great job setting up a plausible premise; the old bored housewife works every time. The sex well written too!

    I hope to finish reading the rest of the chapters soon.

    Well done!

    DC (94saturn)

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  • From ANON - I WUV YOU on December 13, 2006
    Yes, you heard right, marry me right now! Unless you're a guy, then I'll buy you some porn.
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  • From ANON - Ominae on December 10, 2006
    That's it?

    NOOO!!! I really, really liked the story....
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 09, 2006
    I'd like to see Shinji's memories of his shagging with Maya, Ritsuko and one of his college teachers you say eh?
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  • From ANON - Alex.M on December 08, 2006
    I have to say you really are a good writer, because this is one of the most erotic story in this whole net. I was wondering also if you could like put Shinji having sex with Maya, Ritsuko, Rei and a reunion with Misato. But pretty much even with out them this is still a great story worth reading and I give it a five out of five. Also please update soon because many people are getting flamed because of the lack of updating and I really hated it when good writers get flamed. So update soon.
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  • From Mic123 on October 27, 2004
    Very good, and ya your right bout the Hikari/ Sinji ficks lol, its all bout Sinji/ Rei or Sinji/ Asuka lol nice change for once lol exelently done a must read lol
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  • From ANON - Brian,Dark Emotionless Shadow on January 21, 2004
    Damn that was the hottest erotic s/h peice I saw here.
    The Omakes were class as well
    Specially the second one ^^

    The feared evil SI author of fanfiction.net
    Brian,Dark Emotionless Shadow~
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  • From ANON - Jay on January 12, 2004
    Excellent story! I thought the omakes at the bottom were pretty funny.

    I know this is a one-shot, or atleast it appears to be a one-shot story but I was wondering if you would continue this with
    different girls? Like Rei for example, perhaps a bit of roleplay like out of one of those NGE doujins on the net.

    Well regardless I liked this and look forward to seeing/reading anything else you write here.
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