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Reviews for Treason and trust

By : obsidiara
  • From falconstrife on February 27, 2004
    Ah hah! Thank goodness for Daisu-chan's stubborness! But my poor little Ken-tenchi. ~huggles Ken~ Don't cry. It's all a misunderstanding!

    So Daisuke's gonna even the score? Hehehe. I have to see what he does. >:D
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  • From falconstrife on February 27, 2004
    Tai, you're a freakin' rapist, you know that! And Osamu... You have a sick mind!

    As for the story itself, it's still great. Dark and twisted and angsty (have I mentioned that I LOVE angst? ^^;;) So I'm still gonna keep reading, because now I just HAVE to know what happens!
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  • From falconstrife on February 27, 2004
    Osamu, as always you are absolutely evil! And as for you, Taichi. You're a heartless bastard! anyway, to the author, I still am enjoying this fic, despite my rants towards Osamu and Taichi. There're some grammar problems, but whateva. So I'll go onto chapter 13 now.
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  • From falconstrife on February 27, 2004
    ~growls~ Get your dirty, incestive hands off of Ken-tenchi, Osamu-akurei!!!

    Eh heh. ^^;; Well, I don't know how he plans to split these two up, considering how sweet Daisuke is once you get past the his... uh... aroused side. Anyway, This is still pretty good.
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  • From falconstrife on February 27, 2004
    Aww... It was cute when Ken-tenchi sneezed. ^_^ But damn you, Osamu! Don't mess with such a perfect couple! And you, Taichi! You should know better than to be helping the prostitution of a minor!!! Anyways, Good work. ^_^
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  • From falconstrife on February 27, 2004
    Oh no.... Daisu-chan and Ken-tenchi finally get to play the super happy game, and Osamu's gonna ruin it!!! ~cries~ Anyway, I loved how the kisses were described, particularly, and my favourite lin in this chapter was "Whatever happened before it doesn’t co For For me you are the purest thing on earth." ^_^ Daisu-chan, you're just so sweet! ^_^ Anyhoo, once again it is good work. Now for the next chapy. ^_^
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  • From falconstrife on February 27, 2004
    Osamu, he's your brother! B-R-O-T-H-E-R!!! BROTHER!!!

    Eh heh... ^^;; Incest really bothers me after watching Wrong Turn and Deliverance. Anyhoo, what is with Ichijouji-san? She's so freaking oblivious! Not very caring, either. But then, she was like that in the show, too. Anyhoo, still pretty good. Must read more now. ^_^
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  • From falconstrife on February 27, 2004
    Osamu, no!!! Daisu-chan, save Ken-tenchi!!! I like how Daisuke and Jun are sorta getting along, tho. Good work. Now for the next chapter.
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  • From falconstrife on February 27, 2004
    Aww... At least Ken is truly aware of his situation though. Now all he needs is to be strong and ask for help! ^_^ Good chapy, and more fluff! I loved it. ^_^ Good work still.
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  • From falconstrife on February 27, 2004
    Aww... Sweet and fluffy with Daisu-chan b Ken Ken-tenchi's hero and all. ^_^ I liked this chapy. Now I really want for Daisu-chan and Ken-tenchi to have a happy ending. And if you haven't guessed it yet, one of my worst habis ris reviewing EVERY SINGLE CHAPTER! ^_^;; hehe. Ato de, and good work! ^_~
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  • From falconstrife on January 30, 1920
    Ken-chan!!! ~cries~ Another cliffy chapy! At least I can see what happens next, tho. So... If you didn't guess, I'm still enjoying this story. Good work. ^_^ Now onto chapy 5.
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  • From falconstrife on February 27, 2004
    Ohh.... bit of a cliffy here. At least the next chapters are already up! ^_^ Anyway, this was pretty good. I liked how Daisuke kinda just lost to his darker intentions, but still loved Ken in the end. Poor, poor, Daisu-chan.
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  • From falconstrife on February 27, 2004
    Nuu!!!! Daisuke, don't do it! Osamu is evil! ~blinks~ But then again, Daisuke and Ken will be together. ^_^ Good so far.
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  • From falconstrife on February 27, 2004
    Hmm.... You've caught my attention. Let's go on to chapter 2, shall we. ^^
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  • From on February 09, 2004
    This story, though somewhat disturbing, is quite intriguing. I like the dark look on Osamu and Ke rel relationship, and Daisus ats attitude towards Osamu is quite interesting. Grammar should receive a bit more attention, as some of the sentences tend to be misstyped. Otherwise, good work.
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