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Reviews for Broken

By : KradMousy
  • From ANON - Jewel on March 07, 2015
    This was wonderful. Even if I knew little or maybe even nothing about this fandom, this would be a good read. The cadence of Krad's speech matched the roughness he desired. The sex was well balanced with the thoughts. It builds momentum in the reader as Krad's momentum build's. I almost want to say it was expected that Krad would breakdown and ask for more and thus anti climatic but pacing, word choices, mood and tone that was created makes the reader feel present and thus the breaking down was important. The kiss was a surprise and of course the last line perfect. Well done. Thanks for writing and posting.
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  • From ANON - meikouhaikitsune(nsi) on December 09, 2005
    O.O WoW That was good. The words flowed. The plot was awsoe. Even though to others that's not a plot. Damn That was good. It was well written to continue writing I would like to read more of your work
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 26, 2005
    Bo YEAH !!! Thats what ppl need to be writning ! Do you not agree...?! Why cant ppl see it our way ?That was quite nice I hope to read more !
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  • From ANON - kitsune on September 17, 2005
    that was enjoyable. i watch the series on anime on demand and i thought it seemed like something dark and krad might do if ever given the chance. as i watch the show i sometimes wonder about those two.
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  • From ANON - Kitsuki on June 19, 2004
    Very good, you definately pinned Krad's persona, I think you could take this further than a one shot,
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  • From ANON - alfirinsereg on June 08, 2004
    woo hoo it was good you keep at it i was reading it to my friend on the phone and she liked it too keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Katie_the_saru on March 20, 2004
    aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. Kawaii!!
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  • From ANON - unmei on January 30, 2004
    That was pretty damn amazing! I actually felt kind of sorry for Krad there and I think he is a cold bastard otherwise. A damn sexy cold bastard. Hehe.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 16, 2004
    Amazing...

    I'm shocked that you have so few reviews--you're just plain great.
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  • From ANON - Angel on January 10, 2004
    wow...sugoi ^_^ that was beautifuly written, loved it, ano.. i dont understand how being ravished by dark could make krad broken..
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