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Reviews for A Twist With Spice

By : Zerianyu
  • From ANON - Kura on October 16, 2006
    Hihi~ I think there's some problem with uploading of chapter 1? Because I can only see the disclaimer, but not the actual chapter. I can see chapter 2 fine though.

    Could you upload chapter one again? >.< I really want to read it ~

    *goes to read chapter two*
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  • From ANON - Princess Destiny on May 30, 2005
    Hey girl,

    Just thought I'd let you know that you don't have Chapter Four up here. It has Chapter Three, then skips to Five. I had to grab it off of fanfiction.net for the Battousai And Kaoru Archives upload. :)

    You know I totally love this Fanfic right? And I don't usually like AR's!

    Hugs,
    PD
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  • From ANON - Neko_Chan on February 27, 2005
    Don't Worry...Ninja do use Swords! At least in The Legend of the Five Rings RPG they do. I made a Ninja once that used it as her primary weapon, She even had a how lotta poisons on her person at all times and had a neat system where she knew what each pioson was in each vial so she could quickly apply some to her blade and attack. Hehe She also had many cover names if she was ever in a possition where she had to disclose her name. And, (as ninja arn't supposed to exsist) she was often seen wondering with her companions dressed as a Geisha! hehe. Well any way, this is a wonderful story so far, even if at sometimes I get lots and don't know whats going on or why, (like in the begining after Yahiko hit Kaoru, i didn't know it was kenshin kissing her till like the next chapter)
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  • From ANON - Sailor Tiamat (to lazy to sign in) on October 11, 2004
    Wow. That was...wow. I thought it was really happening. ^_^ Poor Kaoru. Wanting to jump Kenshin's bone and wanting to be a proper lady. Must be tough. Loved the lime.
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  • From ANON - EditorDee on May 15, 2004
    Hi there, I just finished reading your story. I like it. I'm a little confused, like what happened with Yahiko, wasn't he captured? Maybe I missed that part. I believe in giving actual reviews, this isn't a flame, I swear, I'm just trying to be helpful. Try fleshing the story out a bit. ot cot confused with the scene changes. Kaoru and Kenshin are kissing, but that's it, right? And Aoshi and Misao, you skipped a lot that it was difficult to follow. The story is great. I definitely understand what you're doing with it, I see the AU, but the story seems muddled and not quite clear sometimes. Like Sano going from kitchen raider to friend that every one knows. I like what you're doing with it though and I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter.

    If you'd like, email me at queen_of_insanity@hotmail.com or EditorDee@writing.com, I would be willing to give you a more fleshed out review.

    I love your story, keep it up!

    Sorry this kind of went on a little longer than I had first planned..... ^^;;
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  • From ANON - Shiro ryu on May 15, 2004
    Ah, I am glad you started updating this again. I look forward to reading more! Thank you!
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  • From ANON - Gemini on March 23, 2004
    (Laughing manically) That was great!!! Keep 'em coming!!!
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  • From ANON - A-chan on March 21, 2004
    OH MY GOODNESS! This was the one on ff.net that I loved, and i was stuck on this very same chp and you STILL haven't updated, geez geez geez girl? what up? lol
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  • From ANON - Get¨ ( on March 20, 2004
    OHHHHHHHHHH! Please, please, please, pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease!!! Must have more lime/lemon!!! Can't help...it. I don't think I'l be able to go to sleep tonight. To many visions of Kenshin going through my head!!! Pleeeeeease update soon, Sincerely, loyal fan.
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  • From ANON - Shiro Ryu on February 25, 2004
    I love it! I love it! Too Short! Toooo Shoort! More! Please! Pwetty Pweeese!!!!!!!!!!! With sugar on top?!
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  • From ANON - Charmed18 on February 16, 2004
    Ok, sorry I guess it didn't show what I wanted you to put at the end of your review..... Ok in this order, on one line




    Ok? Ok good

    Ja ne!!
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  • From ANON - Charmed18 on February 16, 2004
    Hey!! This story is really really really good!

    I wonder if you would allow me to post it for you on fanfiction.net...

    I'm serious!! This story is great!! I would be honored to post it for you! And I would always mention in the summary that I am just posting it for you!

    Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! If you are ok with this idea, just go to fanfiction.net, looked up Charmed18 and just review on my story Kenshin!

    If you say yes, I will ostiosting it by my new name Iris on a Cloudy Day

    Please give me a quick response!!! if you respond at all, just put at the end of your review
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  • From ANON - Serene on February 14, 2004
    I really enjoy your story, it's well writtne ,and you're right, the last paragraph made little sense, but it was still good anyway. You should continue posting the upcoming chapters, I know that I would continue to read the story. Fix your clarity, and stay focused, and you will have a very well writen story on your hands, good jog with everything so far.

    - Serene :)
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  • From ANON - Shiro Ryu on February 13, 2004
    You guys are both doing a great job, both author and editor. I am really enjoying this fic. I hope you update soon!
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  • From ANON - CybrEmly01 on February 12, 2004
    Talent, talent everywhere, and not a bit of it mine. I think I should be env.
    .

    *wink* Just kidding. Anyways, this story has lots of potential. Please continue
    with it.

    Ja Ne,
    CybrEmly
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