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Reviews for Eternal Devotion

By : Brightdreamer
  • From kunfyouzed on March 12, 2024

    Ahhh I loved this! I really enjoyed how even them getting together was a competition and how Kazuma took the lead with his experience but Ryuho was a quick learner and had to show Kazuma his skills, or else he would lose. It just fit them so perfectly! I also how the way you had them talking with each other, it felt like ways they would talk. Thanx so much, bye!!


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  • From kunfyouzed on February 27, 2024

    Ahhhh I love this so much! How Ryuho doesn't know exactly why he cares so much that Kazuma lives and why he goes so far to help him. And I really like the ideas of Alters being able to share their power and heal others, especially Sherice's didn't really have anything to do with healing but she was able to. The idea of it being tied to the strength of your feelings and how Ryuho must really care for Kazuma to heal him is something I love.

    Also love how Kazuma came back and kinda picked up on Ryuho having saved him and doesn't know how to thank him for it. And how that alone was able to settle Ryuho after he was upset that Kazuma wanted him to leave. This was just so perfect, thanx! 


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  • From drcomalfy on June 09, 2007
    Ah, I wish you'd have continued. Anyway, awesomely hot! Thanks for writing that! Yay!
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  • From on August 19, 2006
    I truly admired the writing. It was fantastic! I love it. I know it's going to be a story I will not soon forget. I have no idea if you are going to continue and I will not urge but it wouldn't be a waste to continue...
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  • From ANON - youko on June 24, 2006
    HEY TAHT WAS GREAT!!!I did hope they would have gotten frther hehehe^_^but that okay..so hope you you up-date!!!
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  • From ANON - SpBuffy on December 09, 2005
    Yeah, I would completely dig it if you continued this story. This was very well written. The characters really consistant with the series. Thanks for your work.
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  • From InuKagnSessy on October 24, 2005
    omg that was really good, soo passionate and erotic...i really REALLY hope there is more to this story. i'm dying to see what happens next
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  • From ANON - reckless mist on October 24, 2005
    Awesome! Update soon, kudasai!
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on August 09, 2005
    man, this was beautifully written. I absolutely loved it. you have got to update with more soon
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  • From ANON - fireanice on July 29, 2005
    OMg more plrease how about how kazuma'z friend react anyway i loved it fangirl squeal
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  • From ANON - tsuki on July 25, 2005
    i love it! its a perfect fic for my favorite yaoi couple! youre one of the few fanfic goddesses of the world

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  • From ANON - Sekhmet on July 24, 2005
    You grace this website with your pace, your style, the way you kept them in-character, and the sheer maturity of it all. I'm so happy you didn't have to use grotesque slang just to move the story along. I find too many lemons both here and on other sites that are too poorly written for good taste. Excellent work. I applaud you.
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  • From ANON - Vladimir on July 12, 2005
    Very well done--the pacing and set-up are well-done, and protagonists are very much in character. Wouldn't mind a sequel, although it's not really necessary.
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  • From ANON - Akela on July 02, 2005
    ok... that wasnt technically a lemon.... more, i say!!
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  • From ANON - nashkitty on June 27, 2005
    Great writing! I especially liked the descriptions. It was like I was right there...(I wish!)
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