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Reviews for Someone Else\'s Blood

By : mysteriax0x
  • From ANON - subjunctivity on May 03, 2005
    Hmm, I agree that this could've used a bit more of a warning at the top. Talk to the readers and make them happy!
    Otherwise, I liked the way you wrote it. It has a particularly cold feeling, which makes it realistically unreal (er..?).
    I was looking around for more fiction by you, but there appears not to be any...at the moment. I hope the negative review didn't scare you away.
    If I could make one last note, I ought to mention that the text had numerous accidental line breaks that made it hard to read. That could be fixed easily by re-typing or uploading as text area.
    Anyway, have a nice day!
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  • From ANON - alfirinsereg on April 05, 2004
    so sad
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  • From ANON - Wataru-chan and Ms. Mamoru on March 27, 2004
    Wataru-chan says:
    OYYYYY?!?!!? ::has intense spaz:: Do you like making Ken-kun suffer?!?!?! ::revives Ken:: Oy vey dude... I've gotta say it's really well-written... I don't know how much I can say about the plot... T_T T_T T_T T_T The sorrow! Oh the pain and sorrow! ::clutches Ken:: Ayaaaa you bakaaa

    Ms. Mamoru:
    *grabs ken from wataru and runs off with him to a hospital* MY KEN!! OH AYA, YOU KILLED MY KEN!! *sobs*
    *gets ken into a hospital bed to use reviving powers*
    *hesitates before putting aya in ooo*
    oo*
    dunno if i should save you....you KILLED KEN and YOURSELF.....T_T
    well written but RIDICULOUSLY SAD!!!! INETHICALLY AND HORRENDOUSLY SAD!

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  • From ANON - Stefanie on February 21, 2004
    You need to add a proper warning to this story, DEATHFIC alone will not cover it. This story contains graphic violence and rape, which you failed to mention and it was therefore unexpected and unwelcomed. I suggest you put a proper wng ung up so that no one else has to be so unpleasantly surprised as I was.
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  • From ANON - KittyKristi on February 12, 2004
    Well what do you know? That's how I always wanted to see Ken die. -sick woman-

    Nee, you ever need a beta reader or any help you can definately come to me. This story had a way sexy concept. ^.~
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