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Reviews for White and Green

By : modernmouse
  • From ANON - AI on August 20, 2005
    I know it's good because the pairing didn't make me cringe. ^^

    I'm a K/V (or V/K?) supporter, myself... so it's hard to read much else. But, this was beautifully written. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - nutmeg on December 20, 2004
    wow...and I mean wow...that was amazing. You should really write more like this.
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  • From blynkin108 on February 23, 2004
    Amazing. When I read the pairing, I was like, this is just going to be shameless, ooc smut. It was not THAT ooc, actually... and very well done. ^.^
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  • From ANON - Scrawl on February 22, 2004
    *blinks* well, that was strange. good though. poor Knives...he never /wanted/ to be a psycho, huh?
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  • From ANON - Aneaniel on February 18, 2004
    I....love you? You are AWESOME girl! Oh my GOD! This is like...just WHOA! Mmmm this was NIIIIIIIIIICE! Write more my friend!!! -.- and CURSE Ff.Net for takin' Musings down!!
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  • From ANON - SpiritFighter on February 13, 2004
    O_O wow.... that was awsome in a strange way. I really liked it but I can't seem to explain why. How weird is that? But I REALLY liked it though. You have a real nice writing style.
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  • From ANON - Kimbo on February 13, 2004
    It's certianly OoC, but boy is it well written! Never really looked much at this particular pairing, but damn. You managed to deviate (sp?) from the characters set behaviour in a totally believable and interesting manner. Yet, they still maintain the basic patterns of behaviour. Knives using others for his own means, and Wolfwood being manipulated, even if he isn't complaining...;D

    No lovey dovey man sex for this story, no way! It was also an interesting and successful change from your usual fare.
    You rock.

    I like the last minute lightening of the mood by the carpet reference. Got a smile from me.

    *pestersannoyinglyforReflecupdaupdatei'llleaveyoualonenow*


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  • From ANON - Daniella Wisdom on February 13, 2004
    Loved it ;3
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  • From ANON - blurnette989 on February 12, 2004
    I was surprised by this indeed. I blushed almost immediately at the beginning, not really expecting this form you, but I courageously kept on, hehe. I think the beginning was a little shaky, but what really brough tog together for me was this passage:

    It was knitting itself into reality. The sounds of insects humming made itself out of the thrumming of the blood in his veins. The slap of Wolfwood’s flesh against his own gave birth to a lake in the distance whose water was lapping gently at the edge of the shore. The sweat on their bodies transfigured into the heat of a gng sng sun. The moist breath on his back was a gentle whisper in his ear.
    Grunt, grind, thrust, strangled cry.
    [Fucking.]
    Breeze, touch, glance, honest smile.
    [Loving.]
    White carpet under his hands. Green grass under his feet.
    “Ungh! Knives!”
    /Knives./
    I felt this was a particularly strong point of the story and from here on out i was enthusiastic not only about sexy straight up porn boy sex, but also the artistic endeavour you were on. When you broguht paraparalells together it was really great to read, and was so much more than hard fucking. I really liked it.
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  • From ANON - Yma on February 12, 2004
    Interesting... I'm not swhatwhat else to say about it... but it's interesting. I liked the way you did Knives, even if this is a couple I can NEVER imagine realy happening. Sorry I don't have anything more positive to say. Nice writing, I'm just not sure (personally) about the story. But this is just me, my tastes, others will and should tell you different.
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  • From laceyleopard on February 12, 2004
    Lovely imagery. It's a fabulous smut fic with a pretty pairing that wouldn't normally happen. Thank you for writing it.
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