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Reviews for The Movie or Fun With Nacho Cheese

By : ladymanhammer
  • From videovamp on January 07, 2008
    I remember reading this back when it was on FF.net and I loved it so much. I'm glad to have found it once more.
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  • From ravielyaxis on April 22, 2007
    Are you gonna add more to this, or no?
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  • From ANON - CrimsonFallenAngel on October 23, 2005
    I liked it! One thing, though... try to use more varied adjectives. Avoid using the same one twice in a paragraph. Other than that, it was good!
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  • From ANON - Nis-chan on June 28, 2005
    eee~ soo cute. I love themmm ^_^
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on October 17, 2004
    That was great!!! I loved it!!! Very clever, cute, and original -- keep up the good work!!!
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  • From ANON - Hikari Rioki on August 18, 2004
    Hey there! I was wondering when you were gonna write the pudding part. Is it completely written yet? *tired of waiting for an update* I hope you get done with it soon... Oh well, bug ya some other time then.
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  • From ANON - Tekko on March 21, 2004
    Yay for HaruxYuki yaoi! *gives much praise and cow plushies* I've just recently watched Fruits Basket and Fell in love with Harusoonsoon as he appered *waits impatiantly for the manga to be translated* Bravo for an awesome fic! Wrtie many many more! *offers cookies*
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  • From ANON - Kurai-chan on March 18, 2004
    You know, sometimes it's been a while, you need your fill of yaoi and you need it then and there. Most fics take at least 3 chapters of having a story before there's anything of the sort.

    I like reading fic and love a story, but right now i just wanted some good yaoi. It's good because your story got right into it.

    However, I would say that if you want to continue with it and make it a proper fic which you proof read etc. rather than just a small ficlet, I would suggest you write a bit for the start. Mainly tt tht the reader emotinally involved with the characters more.

    Very good bit of writing though. I gave it a good rating. Well done.
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  • From ANON - lala on March 04, 2004
    hoo boy, have fun haru and yukito... *waves*
    vute fic!
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  • From ANON - ender on March 03, 2004
    oooooh that was yummy, to all parties i am sure. i just love this pairing, they are so sexy. anywho i loved it, great use of cheese
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  • From ANON - 6789me on February 20, 2004
    hmmm, after all that cheese, my teeth hurt. lol. kickass story. i love this pairing and i wish it was like this in the manga.
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  • From ANON - Contolled substance on February 17, 2004
    Interesting...^_^
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