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Reviews for Cream

By : JewelMaiden
  • From Shadowfox13 on September 10, 2012
    *lol* That was funny. :D Bet Leon will be wondering what that ache is, eh? *hahahahaha*
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  • From wishfulliving89 on April 28, 2010
    love the story.
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  • From Siarra on February 09, 2005
    Yup, I definitely loved this, although almost all the while I was making sympathetic whimpers for Leon. I know, I'm sorry but I couldn't stop thinking about those, albeit beautifully so, very much manicured fingernails D has when he was stretching Leon.
    Your general style of writing might use a bit more practice but the little quirks and characters were lovely. I'm sure we all believe that the cream was spilled accidentally... Right? ;)
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  • From on December 10, 2004
    yaaat i love D/leon stories make another chapter!please?
    love,
    Sakura Miko Lee Setsu

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  • From hentaipie on November 03, 2004
    whoa! That went fast. It was pretty good, keep going
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  • From ANON - Liz B. on July 10, 2004
    Wow, your first fanfic and its a lemon, good job! I like the way it had D "accidently spill" whipped cream RIGHT ON LEON'S CROTCH. It made me laugh and was a good segway into nice, lemony actions. GREAT JOB!!! You need to through a "YAY!!! My first fan-fiction is finally done!!!" Party with all of your yaoi-loving friends! Keep up the good work!!
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  • From ANON - jazzy on April 19, 2004
    I thought you did a well catching their personalities (totaly dig a dominant D but I would think Leon would have needed a little more romancing/ seducing/coaxing into having a full on encounter with D. But then a PWP is about sex and their for no complaints should be cried)
    I would love to see another chapter though ^-^;
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  • From ANON - Seraphim on March 23, 2004
    that was funny. :) i love it when he says "tyipical male"
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  • From ANON - Sailor Aurora on March 12, 2004
    while this wasn't the best written, it was pretty good...
    and I did like the ending.. leaves you wondering if it really happened or not. ;)
    although with Count D's powers, the dreams seems to have a frightening real, soild subtance to it..
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  • From ANON - daeth- on February 27, 2004
    Thank you thank you some one final made one and so me andvoicvoices in my mine thank you


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  • From ANON - MOFAF on February 20, 2004
    hmmmmm....love the story ... wonder what the count would give him next time....chocolate or maybe strawberries and sauce...or maybe whipped cream...lol
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