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Reviews for The Reed Legacy

By : ShiniMacCloud
  • From ANON - dy_mdy_moonlight on June 17, 2004
    This is a great story! It follows the same rhythim and style as the actual show! Please write more? this is absolutely wonderful. I cant tell you how absorbed I am in this, please please please write more of this, its beautiful.
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  • From ANON - Verna S. on May 19, 2004
    This is alright, longest thing here, too... Er. But why is it not on fanfiction.net or something...? I don't really see any "adult" content yet, just buildup (unless things are going to get very racy later on). I like the theories behind all the messy family-line stuff. I always thought it was a little strange how Fujitaka and Eriol were supposed to each have one part of Clow's soul, but Eriol got all the memories/power. (In the end of the manga he supposedly splits his powers up and gives half to Fujitaka, but I haven't read it yet so I'm just going on hearsay).

    The names you use for your OC's are a little sailormoon-ish. I can't help but think of sailormoon when I read them and that distrace a e a little from the plot.

    You've got Yue and Kero's characters fleshed out nicely, in fact everyone more or less seems in character. However I think having everyone paired off nicely (S&S, E&T, T&Y/Y, etc.) works a little *too* well. You may want to consider throwing some problems in there, a wrench into the well-oiled love schemes to mix things up a bit. E&T is cute, but you need to *explain* it... er, find reasons for it. I'm sort of glad you had Kaho leave due to the age discrepancy, though. Her thing for younger men always freaked me out. -_-;

    Lastly, if Yue is (er, was) in love with his brother, then what...? Confusion. Is that why you've got this 'fic up here? Because there'll be graphic incestual scenes coming up soon?

    Anyways, I'm intrigued. Let's see where this goes! Good luck with graduation, by the way. ^_^
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  • From ANON - madness on May 07, 2004
    erk, how do they get out of this one?
    excellently written! please continue!
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  • From ANON - KittuPaladin on March 18, 2004
    Hey! Where's the rest!!!!!?
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  • From ANON - Jedi James on March 03, 2004
    write moor now nowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
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