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Reviews for Endymion

By : intervigilum
  • From ANON - Anon on March 10, 2004
    Wow!!!! Very nicely written.
    I must compliment you on several points. Firstly, on how well you captured (and stayed true) to the characters throughout the piece. Secondly, thank you for not rushing the story. If it had developed at any other pace, I'm afraid that it would have too easily become just another average sex fic. Instead, I found it wonderfully vibrant and erotic; the descriptions of both feelings and actions making it easy to become aborbed by it.

    Thank you and please consider writing more.
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  • From ANON - Raenef on March 10, 2004
    Great story. Amazing lemon. I have never seen something so detailed. Most people don't realize how naive and immatureginsgins are at sex, but you got it done perfectly.
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  • From ANON - alicia on March 10, 2004
    Man that was great...very exciting

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  • From ANON - Soranji on March 09, 2004
    Wow.. I hope there is more... Its too good not to have more..
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  • From ANON - Nikita on March 09, 2004
    Pardon me while I laugh my ASS off at myself.

    This is your *only* story... obviously I shouldn't attempt to write anything at three a.m. *blushes*
    Got here via a recommended reading link and didn't realize it. I just needed to correct my error so I didn't sound like a moron. Well... a complete moron, anyways.

    Might I add, what a damn shame this is your only story. :)
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  • From ANON - Nikita on March 09, 2004
    Oh. Oh.

    This just made me purr.

    You've got Amon and Robin down to a damn 'T' and... I obviously still need a moment to recover. *g* Beautifully crafted, and enough sexy real smut to melt Antarctica.

    If you write more, I'd be your slave forever. Which may not be as desirable as it sounds, since I come along with a precocious infant, but still... ummm... pretty please?

    With naAmonAmon on top?

    Would (obviously) love to see more WHR, and I love all your other stories too, and rev review each one if you want pitiful mewlings. *G*

    Thanks for writing this.
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  • From ANON - LionHeart823 on March 09, 2004
    Mhm...is that the end? or what? I mean it would be a good ending and all....but I was just wondering y'know? Great Story though!
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  • From ANON - KagoKitty on March 08, 2004
    woo hoo!! that was awesome...
    not short, but definately sweet!!
    =^-.~^=
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  • From ANON - ara on March 08, 2004
    :Fans self: WHOA! That was unbelievably hot and sexy. Amon, you sly dog you. Too bad it wasn't real. My goodness...off to take a cold, cold shower.
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  • From ANON - Atropa on March 08, 2004
    This was probably one of the best stories I've ever read here on AFF.net. I loved it...
    So well wri... ... so well done... well done!!

    /Atropa in a bliss
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  • From SilverFox on March 08, 2004
    O.o! I don't think I can watch Witch Hunter Robin the same way after reading this...You should do another chapter, this time with Robin...It was good, not to mention interesting! Anyhoo, later!
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  • From ANON - Oyuki on March 07, 2004
    that was really good. very nice.
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  • From ANON - Yume No Miko on March 06, 2004
    I've read a whole lot of lemon fanfics for different series. I've even read stories posted on Literotica.com...

    This by far is the Best, well drawn out lemon I have ever read. May I suggest that you write one where Amon's dream becomes a reality? (would love to see that)
    Either way, I am looking forward to seeing more great work from you, Keep up the good job

    Yumeko
    Dream Priestess extraordnare
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  • From ANON - Sara-sama on March 06, 2004
    OMG!! I have just started watching WHR on AS, so I don't have the original Japanese version yet; but I LOOOVE the way you wrote this story! I don't know what's going to happen in the series, but I think that Amon and Robin have a bond like this - I know I want them to! This was a great story, so well written, and then to find out it was all a dream of Amon's??? *scream* This is so wonderful!!!


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  • From on March 05, 2004
    OMG!! I was ...wow....that's an awesome ficcie! ^o^ Quite believable and very well written- you have a talent for keeping the characters' personalities intact. ^-^ You must allow me to tell you that you have one incredibly tasteful lemon here (pardon the pun) and I'm quite pleased with the way you laid it out. Great job.
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