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Reviews for Infidelities *Revised & Edited*

By : mizu
  • From ANON - monica on June 24, 2005
    i DON'T GET TIRED OF READING THIS. heh. -_-;.. not my fault.
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  • From ANON - fay mikamura and Hoshi on June 14, 2005
    I really loved this fic...i think that u did such a great job at figuering out what was the matter and much more..i love ur writting..^__^
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  • From ANON - monica on June 02, 2005
    yay!.. there was a filipino in ur fic.. IM A FILIPINO!!.. THAT MADE MY DAY.. bedsied that.. the fic was amazing..
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  • From ANON - Kayla on April 15, 2005
    OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WRITE WRITE WRITE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOX
    KAYLA
    pS I put my thick, (sadly batteryless) electric toothbrush to work during this fic!!! (and not on my teeth *wink*

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  • From ANON - bitch please on April 02, 2005
    Do your readers a favor. If you insist on using the fangirl japanese that makes you look like a know-it-all fourteen year old, kindly put a fucking translation before you start the chapter so the reader knows what the hell one character is saying to another. Unlike you, the majority of us do not have babbelfish on our favorites list and frankly, do you know how annoying it would be if we had to look up a word every time you use it? It breaks the flow of your story and defeats it. Grow up.
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  • From ANON - Jacquee on March 31, 2005
    Awesomeness. Only one thing could make this fic better: an epilogue with Dee (or Ryo) waking up in the middle of the night with an "inconvenience" and Dee insisting that it be taken care of right away. Not a whole scene, just the beginning with Dee remembering the night that started it all as he presses Ryo into the bed. And then the end.
    But that's just me. I dunno, seems like it'd bring more closure to the story but hey, you're the boss.
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  • From ANON - joonatan on February 24, 2005
    Yes, yes, YEESSSS!!!!! I just love Dee getting all aggressive and just fucking Ryos brains off. That is the way it should be. Hawt, absolutely hawt. And well written stuff, so big thanks to you. Even though stories like this are the reason I'm absolutely addicted to fanfics...
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  • From ANON - Zerianyu on September 19, 2004
    Hey

    IT WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOCUTE THE LAST CHAPTER. Sorry no better word to descibe it and who doesn't love a smut fest chapter sometimes lol. I wish I could write like that wahhh. Anyway I loved it and gotta go look at more of your fics hehe.
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  • From ANON - Someone Out There on April 27, 2004
    Hey, I THOUGHT I had written a review for this, but when I read down the reviews I'm not there @_@! I feel terrible! Because I've read this story about three times now, and I LOVED it! Ryo kind of reminds me of me. Kind of waits to be more encouraged...umm...so to speak. Anyway sorry about a review sooner. I think you should have gotten more of them. Cool how you went to put yourself in there and wound up helping them out. If it'd been me, I think...well we won't go there... Anyway, greab...b....
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  • From ANON - Rose_red on April 16, 2004
    That's pretty good. I generally don't like OCs, but you made her so inconspicous (god I can't spell) that it just pushed the story along instead of distracting you with a Mary Sue. She seemed almost canon, if you're going to give an OC that much 'screentime' make them a little less perfect. Other than that, I congratulate you on a fic well done.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 16, 2004
    Hot stuff! I'm glad those two are happy!
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  • From ANON - RikuNghts (to lazy to sign in) on March 16, 2004
    AHH! There was more! ^_^ So glad too! I thought 2 was end end, but this chapter was just as good! Nicely done... !!!
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  • From isukichan on March 16, 2004
    Woohoo!!! You are a dream come true in writing these fanfics. Hot, damn! Wanna have more ^o^
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  • From ANON - RikuNghts on March 15, 2004
    WHEEW! I thought Dee was gonna leave Ryo for a few minutes there!! VERY nice! Especially the end. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Bunny Nannette on March 15, 2004
    OHMIGAWD!!!!! I loved this story! It was one of the best ones I'ev read so far. Ryo finally admitting his love, for Dee was wonderful! It made me cry at the end, can you believe that! T.T Oh but it was an awesome story. Good ...no TERIFIC, AWESOME, AMAZING SUPER DUPER JOB!! Congrats!
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