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By : Boof
  • From on June 08, 2005
    cute and interesting enough for me to probably continue the story. :)
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  • From ANON - Vladimir on December 21, 2004
    One of the best WHR lemons on this site. I enthusiastically await the climax... in more ways than one.
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  • From bffimagine on October 23, 2004
    I got a bit confused somewhere along the lines...
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  • From ANON - Vladimir on August 19, 2004
    Excellently written... now you just have to take it to its logical conclusion. Ahem.
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  • From ANON - Liz on July 09, 2004
    This is really good. Much better writing than you usually find in fanfic. And it's got everything; the scene where Haruto makes his bet with Michael was hilarious, his guilt later was touching, and the attraction between them is getting interesting. I hope you continue this fic!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 05, 2004
    I just wanted to let you know that this is a really well written story. The characters have really nice development, which surprised me greatly. ^^ Please keep up the good work. I really appreciate being able to read something of this quality. Thank you~!
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  • From ANON - Chirella on April 18, 2004
    Write more, write more, write more! Sakaki is too cute~Awwww.

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  • From ANON - orlandosgirl on April 15, 2004
    it's cool that you updated i the the story so far ket got going
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  • From ANON - iJ3i on April 04, 2004
    Good stuff!
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  • From ANON - pinky01 on March 28, 2004
    wow wow wow. that was amazying. that was the first michael masterbation fic and the first michaelxharuto fic that i have ever read.that was just marvlous work your work inspired me to make a anime male masterbation fanfic archive. and hope to have your story as one of the very first fics.bravo and long live yaoi
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  • From ANON - auronslover on March 26, 2004
    thanks for the yaoi fic ive been waiting for any i liked your story it sounds like there could be a sequal
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  • From Boof on March 25, 2004
    *group hugs*Wow thanks everyone!!!

    It was a little nerve racking writing a fic with nothing to base it on, so I'm really grateful for the feedback. Like I said if anyone can hook me up with more fics please do so.
    (Insert shameless self promotion here) And please support the cause by joining my WHR Yaoi Fan Community http://www.livejournal.com/community/loaded_guns/ , tell your friends there will be punch and pie ~_^ it's also where I'll be posting fanart.

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  • From ANON - laureate on March 24, 2004
    Spectacular! Sexy, sad, psychological. I can't even begin to say how great this is. I realikelike the idea of Michael and Sakaki together, but I've only seen one or two other fics about them. And, I think you really captured them realistically. I feel that you wrote them both masculine (if immature and boyish), and that's sort of a rare thing in slash. Please write more!
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  • From ANON - warrior on March 23, 2004
    I love it!!! Please continu!!! Long live the rookie and the hacker!!!
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  • From ANON - bluepixie13 on March 23, 2004
    that was incredeble plese write more it was so sweet and sexy.
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