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Reviews for Bathwater

By : modernmouse
  • From sorewaaijanai on June 01, 2007
    Good writing, I liked the style, it's refreshing. Very hot too, of course ;).
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  • From sexypancake on March 29, 2007
    very nice! i liked this a lot! i'm particualrly fond of kowaru's facial expressions. i dunno why. lolz. i like when ppl give him a lil bit of emotion. some ppl avoid it all together. i like that he was concerned for shinji!

    great lemon!
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  • From draechaeli on June 09, 2006
    It was very cute. I liked it very much for no plot.

    -Na
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  • From ANON - person on October 28, 2005
    squeee, damn cute! *glomps* Ah, young homosexual erotic love. XD Awesome
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  • From jackalsscalpel on October 26, 2005
    I liked it :3 This is one of my favorite couplings despite how much I think Shinji is a pansy. I absolutely adore Kaworu and the way you portrayed him. the only problem I had was the spelling, reading your fic several times over and also having another person Beta(edit) is also a very good thing. Other than that, I really enjoyed this
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  • From ANON - Elk on September 11, 2005
    Wow...Talk about a EXCELLENT Kaworu/Shinji lemon fic! Nicely done and they're definitely in their characters shoes! Sorry I hadn't reviewed much earlier, Just saw Evangelion couple of days ago and totally got hooked onto the pairing of Kaworu/Shinji. I hope you'll continue to write more Kaworu/Shinji fics, you've really got a great talent! Well, I'm gonna read the recommend fic you told me at the end!

    Til next time,

    Elk
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  • From ANON - Tannah J on August 20, 2005
    Wow, that was great! It's a rare thing, but you've managed to write an intriguing story about sex without it being smut. Bravo!
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  • From ANON - Esty on August 02, 2005
    awwww that was soooo sweet ^-^ please please please continue
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  • From ANON - Ragna01 on April 19, 2005
    Very nice! I'll check out your other fic too!
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  • From ANON - Nelja on April 10, 2005
    I love this one, too!
    It was very, very cute but quite realistic.

    My favourite part :
    //I am so fucked up.//
    //Please don't hurt me.//
    //I think I love you.//


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  • From Elsewhere on March 28, 2005
    This was very nice. Short, but sweet. There really aren't enough fics with this pairing. ^_^ Good job!
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  • From ANON - ae-ran on February 09, 2005
    I liked this one; it was more realistic than the usual smutty Kaoru/Shinji fictions... I liked how you portrayed Shinji as confused and disoriented, while being emotionally fragile and lonely! You show much promise as a writer, especially if you can create such underlying conflicts within a character like Shinji-kun. I really don't know what else to offer you, in terms of constructive criticism... but then again, fanfiction is not supposed or expected to be like the works of Shakespeare, Dickens, etc. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Mashiro on January 26, 2005
    Sweet! And very well written. Good job! :D
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  • From ANON - kari_remon on November 05, 2004
    oh my, this was one deliciously funny, good and exciting fic! I absolutely adored your style, so original, so cute, so fun and.. original. Yes original. Gods I love orginality! The moments with the 3 thoughts at the same time - beautiful! Humm, lemon, I like lemons *look at my name...*, this one was quick but funny -aparently painfull to..., but honeslty I do NOT feel sorry for him.. I mean, Kaworu is an angel... beaut... ... philosophical... CUTE! kaworu... I'll be looking into the other story... definitly...
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  • From ANON - tricky on September 30, 2004
    hot and wet and all squishy romantic beautiful at the same time. perfect!
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