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Reviews for Passion

By : Magicman
  • From ANON - Dark_Lady on November 18, 2006
    I have one word for you...MORE!!! I loved it and i don't usually like f/f fics. but this one was awesome. Hitomi has an underlying bad girl that only comes out in th bedroom and she's hot for Merel. I love how until the seond chapter in the bedroom everyone assumes Hitomi is bi then she says differently. That sorta contradicts the anime alittle with Hitomi likeing Amanop, Allen, and Van but other than that i loved it.
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  • From ANON - Yami nefertira on November 01, 2006
    This was an unexpected jem, but i liked reading it! Unusual pairing, but so sexy and well writen1
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 09, 2005
    Yay, the world needs more Hitomi/Merle! I think Hitomi would seem more in character if you worked on her dialogue.
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  • From ANON - Charon on July 04, 2005
    Yep, they are _very_ OOC, but you knew that from the beginning. There are several things that i appreciate in this fic: one of them is that you manage to spell correctly, do not think that grammar is a place in eastern Europe and keep your comments to the beginning and the end of the chapters. Just to ensure you know it is appreciated. Another one (that you might be more interested in) is that you manage to make up decent dialoges - since i occasionally write a bit myself, i know that often is not easy. You manage to keep up a good flow; i personally would perhaps use a little bit longer descriptions, but that is rather a question of personal preference. Apart from being OOC you manage to construct reasonable characters - they lack in depth yet, but that is unavoidable with the length of the story so far.
    All in all i would say: good work.
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  • From ANON - me on May 01, 2005
    oh damn you should add more
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  • From ANON - kyou on April 16, 2005
    update soon
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  • From ANON - storyteller101 on February 06, 2005
    this is a good story you have to write anther chapter
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  • From ANON - inumoon3*just to lazy to sign in* on January 06, 2005
    I really don't like fem slash, but I do like Allen/Van pairings! I was wondering if you could possibly do a Van and Allen story that had mpreg in it cause I think they are a really cute couple! But I hope you update soon and maybe you could put a lemon in between Van and Allen later on in the story!!! Update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - raven on October 28, 2004
    kool so when r u going to finsh it
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  • From ANON - antagonist on August 24, 2004
    i like this fic very much

    plz update =)))


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  • From ANON - vrukav6 on August 19, 2004
    please do more with this pairing. i love the idea of them together.
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  • From on July 03, 2004
    very nice ut what happens next

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  • From ANON - Anon on June 28, 2004
    MORE!!

    The way you write Hitomi is interesting, and definitely hot. Merle's stubborn refusal is even better. Please continue.
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  • From ANON - WHaTevEr on May 15, 2004
    I thought it was good, the chapters could be longer though...I want to know more, It was out of character sure but still good.
    My suggestion would be that you should be more detailed in some places if you know what I mean!!!
    GREAT JOB!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 09, 2004
    good. very good. please update.
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