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Reviews for Sibling Rivalry

By : SpiralBreeze
  • From ANON - Disturbed on February 27, 2005
    hi, um..... could u maybe make another like this only less um..... rapeish ? k thx. damn you ! now im scared to go near my little brother !
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  • From ANON - sirhcnotilih on October 24, 2004
    WOW! that fuckfucked up.and like it!
    5 out of 5!
    gotta write a sequel!
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  • From ANON - Raven on October 13, 2004
    Damn! Great story!!! Simply brilliant! That black judge was freaking halarious!!! I was laughing the whole chapter! I was feeling really sorry for ash and misty though. Im glad they had a happy ending. I will never be able to look at Max on that damn pokemon show the same way again, lol...

    Great story!
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  • From ANON - SuitCase on September 26, 2004
    That was awfully entertaining. Thank you for an enjoyable half hour, I didn't expect to but I got sucked in :P
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  • From ANON - Nightmare on September 22, 2004
    Cool nice to see you finished it
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  • From ANON - Jupee Gupee on September 19, 2004
    Sibling rivalry was sick twisted, and entertaining! I never liked Max and I'm glad he's dead! Mwuahahah! Misty and Ash forever! hehe
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  • From ANON - Ian Rubin on September 16, 2004
    THANK GOD!!!! If that didn't end I would have LOST it! (Look at my review aboo kno know most of my thoughts on this!) It's about time that Max fucking killed himself!
    PLEASE WRITE MORE! IT'S TOO GOOD TO STOP!
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  • From ANON - Botched on September 16, 2004
    Excellent truly excellent, the story was well thought out and well written. the plot twists really seemed to fit in really well and ever since i read the first chapter i knew that this story had something in it that made it good and although i never could identify what it was. i hope you don't stop writing for a very long time because you seem to have a knack it it even if it's something strange that most don't like to think about. well thats it for me and i'll look for another one of your stories (if you make anymore) from time to time.

    "Never hang up your pen just because one bad story or no reviews. Someone may read your story and like it but not review it, never let it get you down." (this one doesn't apply to sibling rivalry though."

    -Botched
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  • From ANON - Angel With Broken Wings on September 14, 2004
    Hmmm. That's was a ummm calm ending but i still love the judge she should have her own series. She's 2 damn funny. I can imagine Sam doing that LOL. errr great job muhaha. Why do your stories always do better than mine ; ;.
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  • From ANON - Wolfboy1988 on September 12, 2004
    Best ending to a sadisctic fanfic EVER!!
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  • From ANON - Slayer on September 11, 2004
    Okay...there's a few things i have to get off my chest (And please read all of this). actually...alot of things. Your characters are insane, everyone is ooc, May's stupid, Max is stupider, you completely made mockery of the black judge and the irish priest, a father can't kidnap his own daughter, Jenny isn't that much of a bitch (and if she was, i'd have to put her in her place myself) The court was completely stupid, not enough evidence nor serious witnesses, no judge would have ignored the reports, no cop would drug a criminal in front of witnesses, no body curses that much in public, and it seems as if this entire world is just a stupid black hole of insanity........ And for all of these things i have listed..... I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS FIC!!!!!!! Seriously i'm gonna keep reading this shit! Well played fellow writer! (P.S wow....giovanni.... Didn't see that coming.)
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  • From ANON - Conquester on September 10, 2004
    XD Im sorry but this was one hell of a good fic. Yes, it was VERY Screwed up... Hell, it was worse then that! But it was great none the less. My favorite part had to be the comentary, it made you "laugh" even though the stroy made you "cry" See were im goin with this? Bloody ell i ope you are! w00t! There is no way in hell this is the last chapter, i will not have it. I command you to write her!her! >=3 just because im evil that way. *nod nod*


    And trust me, your WAY beyond help... I should know.... *mummbles about my fic that was also screwed up with incest* Yea.... ummm I know where your commen from so hehehehehehe........
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  • From on September 05, 2004
    I must be more screwed up than I thought, because I actually liked this. I could've done without all the references to God, but oh well.
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  • From ANON - Brian hakubi on August 29, 2004
    man making max kill himself..........cool keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - Ian Rubin on August 29, 2004
    OOOOKKAAYYY.......(To quote the movie The Abyss) "Hands down: the goddamnedest thing I ever saw!"
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