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Reviews for In Over Your Head

By : PatoSan
  • From ANON - Kyoto on October 04, 2005
    That was.... Intense. I was pulled in all different kinds of directions, where I could sympathize with all the characters. Great work.
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  • From ANON - yume on May 14, 2005
    wow, that was so i cant even find the words so shu knew what eiri wanted!! man your a good writer
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  • From ANON - elfgirl on February 08, 2005
    Wow... just wow...

    I actually cried for this one... The suspense was killing me as I sat there thinking, cry Yuki, cry damit!... but he doesn't do it until Shuichi's left... I cried like a little baby, it was awesome.
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  • From ANON - bara-aoi on August 19, 2004
    wow, just. . .omg, amazing. This story actually, i dunno, you're wording and thought sequence was just amazing, I actually cried with Yuki. I'm totally blown away by this, really, i mean, you have an amazing talent, you were able to realitically portray the emotions that would be felt in such an event. And i love the ending, l mean I personally hate fics about yuki and shu breaking up, and i wouldn't have kept reading your's if not for the writing, but in the end, it wasn't a break up story at all, it was just a fantastic way of wrag itg it up. I loved it, I feel like i've just read a novel and it was only three chapters,, and i just want to thank you, 'cuz frankly fanfiction isn't generally all that well written and this story just litterally blew me away, i don't think i'll ever be satisfied w/ mediocre writting again. ^__^
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  • From ANON - YaoiLoverVixen on July 10, 2004
    wow. you really captured the raw and open and wouding feelings of this nature bring apon people. your writing style was a bit choppy but the words and the emotion was incredible. when i was finished reading i had to sit for a few seconds so all o own own emotions and thoughts could catch up with me. excellent. pure. open. raw. broken. stripped. real.
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  • From ANON - PINKPLAIDROBOT on May 25, 2004
    I would just like to shake your hand for writing this fic. For ever 100 horrid ones there is one that shines above the rest. I was extremely impressed by this story. ^_^ I particularly enjoy your attention to each character's nuances. I loved how you kept Yuki cynical. I also enjoyed how you kept him apart from the activities on the couch. Most writers would have used this plot device as an excuse to write a threesome and then add some sort of happy "they all lived together" ending. This, of course would have done a horrible injustice to the characters. I also enjoyed how you decribed seeing someone of the same sex naked for the first time. You hit the nail on the head, tust me.(got me thinkin to how it was for me.) I give you five stars and a cookie! ^_^ I hope to read more from you in the future.
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  • From ANON - Stve3 on May 13, 2004
    I don't care if it was a cliché ending I cried damn it I loved it!!!!
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  • From ANON - Nikki on May 11, 2004
    OK, I am sure I have reviewed this twice, however, I have read it more than that *grins*. I really wish you'd write another Yuki POV, you capture it possibly better than any other fic I've read. Yuki and Shu anyway, that is the only pair I care about. Or you could keep Hiro in in someway, as long as it's.. oh whatever. Write more is my point! And post it! Do it NOW! Thank you!
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  • From ANON - Astra on April 29, 2004
    Fantastic, Hiro/Shu-chan is always good but the who fic was wonderful! Im totally en aen away and even found myself crying a little lol!

    Fucking Fantastic keep up the good work and write more ^_^

    Aurorax
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  • From ANON - WickedChild on April 24, 2004
    PatoSan, you didn't disapoint me. I loved your fic. Great job, person!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Kay on April 23, 2004
    That was like the weirdest gravi that I have ever read. It was weird to have shu and hiro together. I guess ntednted to read something new.....but.....damn....you got me crying and feeling real bad now...I thought that Shuichi left him forever. I wanted to yell and say that eiri is an idiot for doing that. You should write more of those....you will be very good at that. I really loved it. I wao cro cry I loved the ending soooo sweet... Keep writeing more. I will read them
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  • From ANON - Nikki on April 19, 2004
    Fous.ous. I love this story, and didn't mind the ending at all. I actually found it surprising, I expected it to be Tatsuya, having received a call from Shu to check on his brother, and Yuki being finally crushed one last time after thinking it was Shuichi holding him. Why did I expect such an unhappy ending? From the rest of the story I guess, I loved it all!
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  • From ANON - RikuNghts (to lazy to sign in) on April 19, 2004
    Ahhh... great ending. Got a little scared there for a second. I love how Yuki thinks throughout the whole thing, and his descriptions. You did very well with this story. Congratulations. It was excellent ^_^
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  • From ANON - Skwishee on April 18, 2004
    ^__^ Love Love Love LOVE it. VEEEEERY well written and insightful as well. THough as much as I adore Yuki/ Shuichi I was almost thrilled that he WAS going to have Hiro instead. I love Hiro/Shuichi. But it ended well as it was, so I have no roomcompcomplain. THanks or a fantastic read!
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  • From ANON - katie on April 18, 2004
    I almot feel sorry for the guy.....ALMOST!
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