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Reviews for Bleeding Heart Blues

By : bagoas
  • From ANON - Kruel on May 13, 2004
    Could you possibly bring Julia back and have Julia/Faye pair up since Faye-Faye is so lonely now??? ^_^ LoL No Jet, cuz that'd be SICK! >.
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  • From ANON - Vixen on April 28, 2004
    Ha, wow, really? Ff.net kicked you off for THAT??? Now that's unjust, cuz...::blushes:: mine are like 10 times worse, if you will, heh. -.-' Guess that's why I put my stuff on here, as well as on there in case I get caught. ::coughs:: Spike/Faye interest me, I suppose, because their relationship reminds me of my best friend and her boyfriend. They started off fighting childislikelike that and, before ya know it, they just randomly, right off the wall hit it off. I was like...wow. lol So yeah, and besides, I like them both, so I like it when my 2 favorite characters have a romance. ^^ It makes more sense now thinking about Spike being ready for something new, but I still think he'd feel a slight pang. Perhaps whenever you have him having more interactions, which I assume that you will, you could have him briefly see her face, then be like...ah, fuck it, hahaha. I never liked her, n-e-way. >.> Incest....wow. -.-' Hahaha I'll admit they're all like a dysfunctional family, but yeah....don't like to think of them that way. ::smirks:: Now I'll have problems writing...DARN YOU!!! lol, just kidding, hahaha. ^-^ Even though it DOES seem weird, now....but I'll just refer to my original ideas about them to fix that, lol. ::gets a writer's rush:: Gah! I suddenly wanna write REALLY bad!!! >.< I only have ONE more thing to say, and then I'll leave you alone. ^_^ Yay! lol The Nymph's a very interesting, dark, secretive character so far, but I'd like to see her character shaped out much more (I assume you were going to do this, anyway, as time progresses). This really helpful thing I do is write a bio about each of my characters (even some info that I'll most likely never need, like hobbies and whatnot) so that I know the character inside/out. It really helps to avoid the typical "Mary Sue", so I hope that that helps. ^_^ Welp...happy writing! Tah! ^,~
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  • From ANON - Emely Raines on April 27, 2004
    I know the whole thing with Original Characters. I have a Harry Potter story that some people just flat out refuse to read because the main character is one of my own. I like the Nymph and could tell she didn't normally do that sort of thing. With Spike being OOC, I agree, but itonlyonly when he's dealing with her. Which led me to believe that she sort of overwhelmed him and and he her. Bumps are good in any major plot ine. I absolutle adore plot over anything else, I like to cringe and wonder, so it's great. I like your Ed too and Spike's reactions to her. Keep it up, I hope to read some more soon.
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  • From ANON - vixen on April 22, 2004
    Hey, you have a VERY good writing style, I'll give you that, but Spike seems MAJORLY OOC. I mean, he wouldn't just randomly havone one night stand with someone he'd just met...I mean, if he didn't ever have the desire to screw Faye, since she seems kind of like nym nymph, I don't think he'd just randomly do someone like that. Also, I'd say that this isn't that graphic, so it's not really necessary to be NC-17. Don't get me wrong, I like your style a LOT, but I just don't really like how quick that all happened. That, and there's no awkwardness between Spike and Faye. Shouldn't there be??? After all, she was basically hinting indirectly that she liked him. Ok, maybe it's my major Spike/Faye shipper self that's making me sposeposed to your version of Spike being all horny and stuff, cuz that just doesn't seem like him. He's more of an aloof guy...he wouldn't so easily forget Julia, either. I'm hoping that maybe you'll have a love triangle between Spike/Nymph/Faye. That'd be interesting, & you'd most likely get more reviews/hits. ^^ Most made up characters that form a relationship with a main characten'tn't fly by with the audience too well since there's some resentment. Again, I hope that I haven't crushed your writing spirit, cuz you really ARE fucking talented! Keep writing! ^,~
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  • From ANON - Emely Raines on April 20, 2004
    It draws ya in. I'll tell you that. It's good. Update soon, K?
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