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Reviews for possession

By : kurtvicious
  • From ANON - NekuYasha on October 20, 2005
    I don't see this pairing often and was delighted to find it. And although I probably would of liked a more romantic (?) interlude, I think you hit their personalities rather accurately. Anthy really is more jaded than most people seem to catch and I think you caught that aspect wonderfully. Out of curiosity, is this a one-shot? Or are you going to write more? I'd love to see if Miki could really get through to her. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Hatchan on April 11, 2004
    I think Anthy's a little out of character here. She's not so straightforward and seductive. Her witchy ways are atle tle more subdued - "I think I'll just strip and change into my nightgown right in front of you..."

    Despite that, this was very good. Your spelling and grammar are great, and you've written Miki very well. This is great as is, but if you were to add any more, I would look forward to reading it.

    Also, I'd recommend polishing your summary - add some capitalization, because I know you know how to use it.

    =^..^=
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  • From ANON - Tropical-Huinnie on April 11, 2004
    That was so sweet,I could really see somthin like this happening in the series.Miki/Anthy are to cute togther
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