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Reviews for A Golden Heat

By : crystalclear
  • From DeityOfDeath on June 03, 2007
    This is a great story and I would totally love to see our neko get knocked up by the puppy.
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  • From ANON - amber on July 14, 2006
    I thought it was excellent ^-^
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  • From ANON - Kirk on January 15, 2006
    DAMN! That was bery, very smext. So smext I think I wanna touch myself :0
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  • From ANON - Drama Queen on January 04, 2006
    I liked it I find your situation interesting ^__^
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  • From ANON - Scarlet_eyes on December 18, 2005
    0.0 wow, that was..it was..AWSOME!! i really like it, you did a really good job on it.
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  • From ANON - Perverted Priestess on December 18, 2005
    Since I'm a Yaoi lover I really disagree, yes it was sick but I loved it I guess that makes me sick too. keep writing more M/M.XD
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  • From ANON - Ile on December 11, 2005
    you may think your not all that great but rly you are... there were some pretty messed up sentences though... ^.^
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  • From ANON - Luna on November 13, 2005
    pmp shit. I have a challenge if your willing can u do a smut one were Ayame and Ritsu are a couple. I read a fic about them on FanFiction.net and i loved it its called Quend on tre somethin i dont know exacttlly what its called but can you make like a lil short sex storyplayin off that story plz. With chocalate 4-play and oral and anal and everything naughty that Aya would do 2 Ritsu but not hurt him. Plz and thank u

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  • From ANON - QoH on November 02, 2005
    Awww they are soo cute together. you have to write a sequel.
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  • From ANON - Vanessa on October 23, 2005
    I thought it was good apart from some speling mistakes but i got the jist of it :)
    Thanks for the read
    V
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  • From ANON - Kumoneko on October 22, 2005
    I love it! It was so good! You've made me a fan of this pairing!

    Very hot! And I was just daydreaming about those two!
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  • From ANON - Basi on October 22, 2005
    I liked it, really. ^_^ I love one-shots, and i have read plenty of them, so i can tell you for sure - it's a fine lemon, indeed. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Tasan on October 18, 2005
    wow....i personally loved it! You did good! It's not normal for me to read lemons, but hey....every girl wants to see her hott guys bang eachother! ^.~ You did great!! Totally made my day!!
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  • From ANON - Shiroi on October 16, 2005
    This is your first lemon? I would have never guessed!

    Don't be embarrassed - you're really good! Seriously, I've read enough lemons I'm almost immune to them. But you make it all new again. You pay attention to the right parts. You give enough plot to introduce the reader to the situation, but not so muchit puts off the play or takes over the story. I would suggest getting a beta just for spell check type stuff, but it's really good work. Don't stop on us - and hey, got any plots with Momiji? lol Bunny boy is ignored in fanfic land!

    Really, keep up the great work. ^.~
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  • From ANON - random reader on October 16, 2005
    WOOT!!! That's was so AWESOME! I love your fiction!!! It was SO GENIOUS! I'm seriously saying that since I've come to realize that KyoGure is the best pairing, ever! Well-done! A few spelling errors were around, but, I loved the lemon! I can't wait to read more of your work! Good luck!
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